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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Some folks think I dance too fast. Those are the ones that can't quite last. Some people say I laugh too loud. But JOY is fleeting--I am proud. There's some that say I hug too hard. It is not so--I have hugged shards. I hear them say, "she's overboard." How else did the white dove soar? Some folks think I am "too much." Maybe? I'm more than "enough"-- for those who want a measured life. No one's wrong. We are, ALL RIGHT. |
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darkling Member
since 2001-08-28
Posts 90altered state of mind |
YOU CAN NEVER LAUGH TOO LOUD! that's a theory in the proccess, anyway. I enjoyed this poem very much. please continue to shower us with words. keep the ink flowing. its amazing what one single word can do. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Too much of you means too much of me Mirrored reflection of twin identity. Too much of you? Thats oxy negativity ... who could ever have too much serenity   |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Some people say I laugh too loud. But JOY is fleeting--I am proud. Amen to this one, Karen..... You deserve all the joy you can possibly grab for yourself... and yes, you should be proud of it... I loved the poem ~ joyful hugsLyra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
darkling...(another cool name) and m'twin, Jan..thank you for dancing with me...and please don't feel left out? (y'KNOW yer my only one!...er..other...me...SOMEDAY WE ARE GOING TO HAVE TO EXPLAIN THIS SHTUFF!) But LYRA!!!! oh...how you touched that "inner me." hand-over-heart hugs to you! You are indeed a lovely spirit. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen dear, Who are these people that are so clueless? I like you just the way you are!  Show you care to those you love...today. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I envy your spirit..your outlook on life and your belief in yourself. Sometimes I feel like I'm standing alone on the edge of the crowd watching you dance...smiling sadly and wishing I could be more like you..... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you just inspired me, mehopes....izzat a new woid? *chuckle* and? sometimes I am still inside...I hope y'can feel that, Sharon... Larry, yer m'baby. I wuv you...ooops? transference? thank you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Awesome! Let's hear it for being a strong individual. I swear, one day the world will understand that everyone needs room to be themselves but also needs to be part of everyone else. I'm just guessing I'll be looooong since buried by then. "Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Absolutely! Right on! By George, I think you've got it! Nan |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Big hard hugs for you sis... Glad to see your spirits soaring and your mouth running...always admire that in a lady!!! (yes...LADY) love ya sis!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I ain't no shard but I'm ready....for the BIG! one....umm umm! Feeling alright.........? Yes joy is fleeting.....She said she worshiped the ground I walked on and sure enough she got all my property! Hi Celeste! Yes I still love you! Please stand still! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
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