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Love Will Come Again
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Love Will Come Again |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Do you remember when we once lived in the garden of our love A place where our hearts were always in full bloom and our love seemed to have no end That same garden now lies barren void of color and life Our vine of passion has now wilted and love has gone to seed taken with the wind and blown away like dust Our once beautiful garden is now overgrown with weeds and the gate which once lead to our Garden of Eden now creaks on rusty hinges Maybe the warm Summer winds will send a new love my way planting a seed within my heart that will bloom and grow I long for the day when love will once again fluorish and my heart will become the centrepiece of love's bouquet Suetang |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I long for the day when love will once again fluorish and my heart will become the centrepiece of love's bouquet WOW Sue, that line is wonderful. May all your dreams come true quickly!! Hugs. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome! After Greg I thought I was gonna be a loner. then I found Liam. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Hey there, Sue.....You keep confusing us... Are you happy and in love or are you sad and lonely? either way, your poetry is beautiful   ~ confused hugsLyra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your lovely comments. Lyra - I am so sorry for confusing you, I guess I am just spreading my wings as far as my writing goes and it can be a mood thing sometimes. Just to let you know I am very happy in my life and have been married to Andrew for 14 years. We are the best of mates and I am a very lucky woman. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Sue, I am so happy you explained your feelings to Lyra just now in your comment, for I too was worried at first and I am so happy it was just a stretch in theme! (kiss on cheek) I wish this loves joy to always fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - you write so well about the passion and feeling os relationship - your touch is very special - thanks Paul |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Another beautiful poem and you have expressed the longing for love, very well. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Everything better be just fine....or I am gonna have to fly down there and sit him down and make him read all of your poems over and over again...until he figures out that there is a very loving woman in his life.... So there! (grins) |
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Spirit Of Twilight Member
since 2002-01-11
Posts 116India |
What a wistful and wonderful poem! Keep writing~Neha |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
this is beautiful. ~SM |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
A wonderful description of the end of love. Enjoyed this! "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Ah, the drought of ended love.... nice A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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