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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were jouvence blue heedless you were bice blue haphazard you were cornflower blue fickle when the lodestar was in variegation and the sky wore sailcloth without wind or parish lantern to guide 'til morn when a plenilune moon sunk heavy on nights campo and eventide ebbed behind to rise you from your ground to float jaunty your bow weight, did you write the dirge songs then did you sew the john words dearly to my mind shirt's garmenture that which was the velvet of my love to the wind did you haw buck harness did you give guise to my eyes then with a glimpse of card fall gamble that I would wear the mantilla of soul water on pages torn from a cats concert jabber did you addict me to persion blue adduction of gloss glaze concave, gloomed as a venus of hesper vesper star or was it just my fascination of imortality and forget me not jewels of god, in a flowered sky ©Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-25-2002 02:26 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
or was it just my fascination of imortality....... my dear friend, me thinks you ARE immortal, or at least your words shall live FOREVER. Did anyone tell you that you ROCK?? (wanna come rock with me. *wink* Morning babe Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
GS...morning sweet lady.....thanks for the attaboy, big ol hugs to ya ms |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To hear these read aloud would make one feel as if having stepped into twilight zoned alive with sounds of cajun laughter... at least, that is what I imagine... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you were jouvence blue heedless youy were bice blue haphazard you were cornflower blue fickle when the lodestar was in variegation and the sky wore sailcloth without wind or parish lantern to guide 'til morn when a plenilune moon sunk heavy on nights campo and eventide ebbed behind to rise you from your ground to float jaunty your bow weight, did you write the dirge songs then ================================== that I would wear the mantilla of soul water on pages torn from a cats concert jabber did you addict me to persion blue adduction of gloss glaze concave, gloomed as a venus of hesper vesper star or was it just my fascination of imortality and forget me not jewels of god, in a flowered sky =================================== OH GOOD GRIEF!! I give, I quit.... I'm breaking me pen...setting me muse free... Where do you find these words????? Could the imagery, vocabulary and personafication in this be any cooler??!!! Ya know...between you and Martie...me thinks there MUST be something in the water out there in Cali and the rest of us dont have a chance  Send me vials of that water ... Karen has cajun rhyme in N.O. you got free verse flowing in yours VERY very cool write DS...most impressive. mothme |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS What an imaginative display of impressions...my head is swimming. Enjoyed this alot! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well Dark...this one left me spinning!  Would love to hear this read aloud by you. Exceptional write poet sir! ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, It's just your fascination of imortality and Egos lamination. Enjoyed [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (06-25-2002 02:15 PM).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I like this series of sound poems, D. Can almost hear you reading them out loud. Definitely good poems for public (or private) readings. C |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine, thanks coffee sip friend....am drink iced coffee now..I appreciate you ms JM...read aloud? shooot I can't say them words..I stutter typing them..but thanks babe....just got all caught up in all the colors of blue in a night sky...water? can ya smoke water? (grin) Martie, waves and fire suit hugs...thanks for the visit ms. Enchantress, refill on the java? thanks for the wavy hug reads ms Sy, humble ones Sy, humble thanks Cor, thanks lady, just wait until the next telemarketer calls..yuck yuck..will just start readin my poems to em..see how long they stay on the line. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
can ya smoke water? (grin) ====================== funny you should mention that.... I almost said in my reply to you on this... "my muse needs some of what youre smoking" came back to put this blue jewel in me library.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, this too made me dizzy with all your powerful vocabulary and imagery, sweet friend, I too had the cats surrounding me and playing their lost concert bits, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
when a plenilune moon sunk heavy on nights campo and eventide ebbed behind to rise you from your ground to float jaunty your bow weight, did you write the dirge songs then My velvet word purse is "filling" up with you. Could you be any more fascinating in this one? What a night verse you pen. Sincerely, Reg |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dark, feeling blue, the water must be doing something for I could drown in your words. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Immortality is a fascinating thought.. even more so is the velvet you write of that softens the touch. Varied, and very nice~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks buddy, for the words. Regina, thanks babe, if it gets too full guess we will have to get you a word trunk? always a pleasure to add to your list. Kethry, humble thanks lady friend for the wave and words of reply Bluezy, thanks ms for the sweet wiggles on my night stuff...much appreciated |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I got a library full of you...I can do this all day. pleeeeease  |
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