Open Poetry #21 |
All Over Again |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~This one is for my fella ...~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Another one of your beautiful master pieces. I love it. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I love the calming effect of this one Marge!!! Love is great, isn't it??? Love ya!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart and writer of the stars light In that place between thought and feel is where you rest in my mind, ever present and like this shimmering jewel of delight you illumine my soul. I love it utterly, I utterly love it MY STARS this is incredible writing utterly soul drenching beautification of the spirit. This is so totally perfect, the flow, the concept and the execution all connect to make this an utterly utterly fabulous piece of writing. You know somewhere there’s a law that forbids you outclassing me, I don’t know where it is, but I’m sure if I searched the ancient statute books but it must be somewhere. So you must stop stealing the stars to illume your writing, you must stop dipping your think in the well of rainbow’s ink and you must halt in your ceaseless quest to be the best. But if you don’t I’ll still wub you. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge So glad you're love is so sweet...give that fella a squeeze for me. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
*sigh* ahh forever lucky in love...what a beautiful poem for your fells Margie girl ~HUgs~ Tracie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I'm jealous. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah, Marge ... your creativity bubbles over, my friend. This is delightfully phrased, and beautifully presented. Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And such a beaut it is, for your fella... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tee-Hee ... this one started out after a conversation Bill and I had about 'colors' ... LOL ... Most men just don't understand mauve (What's wrong with PINK ?).. and crimson ... (What does that mean ? Crimson ???) So when he does find this one in his mailbox ... I think he'll get the idea ! And I'll just *hug* his neck for the inspiration~ SuzieQ~ Thankee galfriend~ Devina~ YEAH .... it's just REAL SUPER~ MarshaLove~ Tee-Hee-Hee .... your reply one-up's my poem~ HELLO MARSHA ... stole a little of your MUSH, did I ? Martie~ I will do just that ! Tracie~ Thank you gal ... love seeing you~ Seymour~ Now artist that you are ... certainly understands Mauve ... and I understand jealous~ VanDana~ Thank so much dear~ Kit~ Awwwwww ... thanks sweetie~ Good to see your smile this fine Sunday morn~ Magnus~ Thanks hon ... it's a beautiful day to be in love~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Bill must fall in love with you, all over again, whenever he reads one of your poems written just for him! Or any of the others for that matter. What joy you must bring to his life! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wonderfully written and supurbly presented and I loved it - thanks - Paul |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are having so much fun with your new weavings... so much fun! |
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Stapelton Junior Member
since 2002-04-16
Posts 13Canada |
a splendid poem, I really enjoyed this one |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
How beautiful love can be... and how beautiful you "weaved" this poem! |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
A very beautiful poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Marge...James |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Lucky fella he is! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ How'd you know ? He's so wonderful ... and he's even learning to like crimson-mauve~ GoodKnight~ Thank you so much ... it was a fun little piece~ Karilea~ I am ! I am ! Stapleton~ Thank you very much~ Glad you enjoyed it~ Neeraja~ How very nice of you to leave such a sweet reply ... thank you~ CherryPopTart~ Thanks ... and I just love your ID name~ REALLY ! JamesMichael~ Thanks so much sweetie~ MyCafe~ Ahhhhh, I'm the lucky one~ Thank you hon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He's a lucky fella Marge! Love the clever arrangement.....Great work! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The presentation, the poem, and the love it expresses are all beautiful. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Playing a little 'catch-up' ... Replying from my library to some lovely people I missed .... ETHome~ Thank you always for the lovely replies~ MySuthernGal~ Awwwww, thankee gal~ We're STILL there ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh, Marge the colors and the words are just making me delirious. Beautiful and what a gift to your loved one. Hmmm...gee, I wonder who that could be? Hugs, Marti |
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