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Open Poetry #21
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GOlDsparklESS
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0 posted 2002-07-31 03:57 PM


A night star surprises me
a stolen moment looms as we're guided
towards the grass.
How many assuming shrouds have you undertaken before
being thrust upon my gaze?

A distant luminary shifts
I meet your inquiry
with a smile
and twinkle.


© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-31 03:59 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart
GOlDsparklESS
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2 posted 2002-11-14 12:16 PM

wow. this is random.
GOlDsparklESS
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3 posted 2002-11-14 12:22 PM

i don't even remember where i was going with this one...maybe i was trying to be DEEP.  this is one that i also pulled out of my butt, inspired by the moon
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