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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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father and daughter perhaps, yes she pretends with her eyes all the way to vegas again but he doesn't pretend with all the love his money can buy and something new on his arm like a perfume tattoo that spreads to his thigh when she touches for sugar and sugar is a cowboy or a brother perhaps, yes or so he pretends when she is around but she doesn't pretend with all the love her money can buy and something new on her arm like a part time tattoo that spreads to her thighs when he touches for sugar and sugar is a habit perhaps, yes he pretends with his eyes ©Dark |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is so Vegas to me....A sugar daddy and perhaps and sugar momma....anyway, nicely done DS...like your style... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS People wear so many faces, sometimes it is hard to tell what is real. You must have been people watching. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mag' thanks amigo..yes he wore her and she wore some other him...etc... ms martie, makin em imortal babe...(grin) here anyway. Thanks for the wiggle wave babe |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, it seems no matter if it is New Orleans, Las Vegas or Los Angeles, there are always many masks people wear that reflect the feel of the place and you speak of this passion so well! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy, magnifique m’sieur , n’est ce pas? Tu ecrie cela lui tient a coeur. Padon mon cheri, j’ai palais Anglaise. This is very very close to my heart, I can hear this inside, loud and clear. And I actually know some this would apply to, amazingly well written darling boy absolutely amazing. Bravi bravi bravissimi. I love this utterly utterly As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You observe well, you write better than most, we learn much from your written observations... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah....thanks my friend..yes, seems they are in everywheretown ms marsha, domo arrigoto (wink) yes my dear, might be the same ones, thanks for the read and reply ms Sunshine, humble thanks lady, they did seem happy too, when they looked the right way .. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Golly, I sure do like the way your mind unravels and leaves a trail for us to wander down. Easy on the sugar baby~ I'm watching my vices, and all that sweet stuff that I love~ |
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