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Rejection (2 of 4 pieces)
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Rejection (2 of 4 pieces) |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX 
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Guy wants love He finds it Lost in the beauty of another Enraptured in her looks Mother Nature's Angel He stares her down As she walks by not even paying attention Guy wants love Yet again, all he gets is rejection Love, Ladycat P.S. You have to follow along with me. There are four pieces to this and this is the second of four. Piece one was Depression. Two more to go. Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. [This message has been edited by Ladycat (06-23-2002 08:23 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Vynette, this is so very sad and so very true to so many people, sweet friend, I feel being lovelorn can be one of the most defeating feelings of all ad I hope you have found someoe who accepts and loves you as well! (sigh) This is a powerful series, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vynette, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
All I can say is, I'd better not have to search hard for 3 or 4. It's past m' bedtime.  These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well, so far... I like 1 and 2....Now to find 3 and 4.... And believe it or not....there are many of us here who have been writing less than 2 years. So, you are in a safe place that is polite and won't ever be negatively critical of your poetry... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Poor fella... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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