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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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In peaceful animation, Like kisses on the wind The remnants of your touch Paint watercolor sin your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
heyyyy I LOVE THIS. the last 2 lines are awesome. I like short poems like this...they say so much to me! ~RosePetal |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ah love it!!!! short but powerful, just the way I like it most. Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Kristopher, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the wonderful words you write, they truly do spread watercolors upon these pages! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Exceptional....this would certainly have been an excellent 20 words or less poem...You do this very well...I think this poem is just fine as it is... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
To all of you, The most beautiful poetry to me is when you receive kind words from those you've never met. thank you all for making me feel so accepted into this community. Sincerely, Kris your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
However did I miss this one??? This is longingly beautiful... many images come to mind sweet man... enjoyed you Kris...you're penning your mark here for sure...  much love ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hot Dayummm, I'm loving your style! It's not easy to make your point in so few words. It's a nice gift you have~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....DANG!!.... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
You are marvelous, just marvelous! Shenachie |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is fantatic. Watercolor sin..I wish I had thought of those words. Sandra |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Kristopher, your poem is short, yet it says a million words. I love the sensual way this poem is written, and it is so short and sweet. In peaceful animation, Like kisses on the wind The remnants of your touch Paint watercolor sin _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
You are all too kind. Thank you for the marvelous replies. Love 2 all Kris your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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