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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2002-06-24 03:56 PM


In my act
I don't have things to remember
I have things to do
In fact
I don't even have an act
I just act like I do


© Copyright 2002 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-06-24 03:59 PM


smiling achoo...y'need an agent?
suthern
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2 posted 2002-06-24 04:11 PM


But you have to remember all the things you have to do... and boy-oh-boy... do you EVER have things to do! LOL If your "busy" is all an act, can I nominate you for a Tony? LOL

Yanno... a blonde could get very dizzy thinking through this one... and I had a head start on dizzy and ditz? LOL

Smiling here, sweets... and enjoying. *S*

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2002-06-24 04:16 PM


I like a man of 'act'ion!
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-06-24 04:22 PM


BroadwayToeMan~
Now that's an act I'd buy tickets to see !
Do you take VISA ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-24-2002 04:24 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-06-24 04:35 PM


Toe,
Glib, quick, clever and cute. Very good

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-06-24 08:09 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh Toerag, I know how you must feel, if the director is telling you what to do you are never really acting, you are just being the role of a robot following commands when they push buttons whereas acting is going about it your own way! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2002-06-24 08:59 PM


Yes, very cute *s

M

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8 posted 2002-06-24 09:52 PM


I agree, Toe, you should be on stage....there's one leaving in 15 minutes!
redheart angrybraids
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9 posted 2002-07-24 05:41 AM


tatda, it is simple, true and lovely, i appreciate every word
very well put, excellenta!

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


Larry C
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10 posted 2002-07-24 11:20 AM


Toe,
That explains it! Hey, did serenity sneeze?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

sodpossom
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11 posted 2002-07-24 11:22 AM


Short,clever and cute!
Neeraja
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12 posted 2002-07-24 01:23 PM


Funny and clever!!!  

Neeraja

WhiteRose
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13 posted 2002-07-24 01:26 PM


You are as I remember you and this poem is sooooooo you. I enjoyed the read.
Madame Chipmunk
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14 posted 2002-07-24 08:02 PM


Mr.Toe...
Don't stub yourself on that stage...or you will end up in a body cast. LOL
~ laughing at you hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Marsha
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15 posted 2002-07-24 08:48 PM


Toe darling boy, this is very you I’d say very cute and short, not that I’m implying you’re short you understand

Wonderful writing darling boy utterly utterly wonderful. Brilliant play on words, well done, this is superb

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

rwood
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16 posted 2002-07-24 09:15 PM


Shall we have a toest..er toast..to your newfound success there Mr. Toe Man dandy?
Very fun you are.


Sincerely,
Reg

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
17 posted 2002-07-24 09:15 PM


Toerag,

The stage beckons within...

BC

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