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Waste Not
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Waste Not |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Waste Not I’ve done the fascination waltz. Moon light on a summer’s night And danced in garments that were false And banished them from out my sight. But have not closed my heart to love. Or refused those dreams of you nor Stopped my wishing on stars above? Or closed my eyes to magic’s view Still see the skies in wistful fades The wonder of the morning’s bright Waters rippling in silver shades Or close my mind when comes the night. I will never give up my goal Nor live inside a hollow well Deny the searching of my soul Or give myself to silent hell. And though I’ve mote around my dream There still is access to the stream. |
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ULookSoPrecious Junior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 16NC, U.S.A. |
*sigh* Wonderful. Thank you. Take Care, Kris "Nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands." -ee cummings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kris, You welcome and thank you. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* you always know how to catch me with your writings....just love it!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hope is never dry, nor staid tend it closely less it fade it brings the writer closer still to revelations of dreams fulfilled  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, You are a dear thank you.  Sunshine, You always say the right thing. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Seymour...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
along streams of life words from heart continue flowing beautifully expressed Seymour yours are simply glowing Hope |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
So good to read you again Sy... *I'm not gonna count how long it's been* *grins* this is the best advice I've heard!!! And we both know I've dipped into the stream a time or two... enjoyed this!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I will never give up my goal Nor live inside a hollow well Deny the searching of my soul Or give myself to silent hell." Okay, well I have moments when I forget. See? I need YOU to remind me! Morning hugs, sy! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've done the fascination waltz. Moon light on a summer's night And danced in garments that were false And banished them from out my sight. But have not closed my heart to love. Or refused those dreams of you nor Stopped my wishing on stars above Or closed my eyes to magic's view Still see the skies in wistful fades The wonder of the morning's bright Waters rippling in silver shades Or close my mind when comes the night. ================================ Sy-babers, this is eye candy and a soul serenade...what a lovely wisdom write. Classic Sy poetry...words of humility and humanity wrapped in your tender rhymes and dressed up with your imagery of nature's many gifts. Still see the skies in wistful fades The wonder of the morning's bright Waters rippling in silver shades Or close my mind when comes the night. how lovely is that verse!! Your painting sighs across me skies  Beautiful poem Stinkylove. and how cool are these lines.... I've done the fascination waltz. And danced in garments that were false WAAY COOL!!  I've no need for a boat ... to float upon your mote. I'll just sail streams of serene upon thy rhyme scheme dreams. *winkiewinkie*   |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is utterly utterly outstandingly written. Never ever do you write anything less that perfection, and again this is another example of your soul’s special sigh. Your writing wafts over my spirit like a zephyr of delight, your writing drifts through the places, which breathe in wondrous joy at the sight of your work Yet again you fill me with awe whatever you write, it has a charm and a magic that contains so much truth. As always darling boy you excel as only you can. I love it utterly utterly utterly As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you James. HopeS, Very sweet, thank you. Devina, Glad you enjoyed and that your back. Serenuty, Morning and thank you darlen. JM, Tinkerbell you are really buzzung me today. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. Marsha, Thank you dear girl. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "And though I’ve mote around my dream There still is access to the stream." From my understanding of motes, they all have a draw bridge...and you are in control of when to put it down and bring it up....and yes..there is the river and I think it's name is Hope or love.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are just the FINEST ! No one comes reMOTEly close to the beautiful verses you share~ Thank you dearest poet~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
... and because you write so well you want not. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Poetic license about the mote. LOL Marge, Love you too. Interloper, OH yes I do I want to write better. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
SY, ENJOYED ANOTHER WISE WRITE...AS ALWAYS YOU DO THESE VERY WELL... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, it helps to move on even when the currents are tough for that is how we approach our goals! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent advice, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Thank you my friend. Noah, Enjoyed your reply. |
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Ryan2801 New Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 9Scotland,U.K. |
Wonderful stuff once again, i have now read 2 of your poems and throughly enjoyed them both (1st being "Gone to Numb"), i look forward to reading much more off your work. Keep up the exceptional work, Ryan2801. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love that you let us access your streaming thoughts..very nice write, Sy *S M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ryan2801 Thank you for the nice reply and glad you enjoyed the writes. Maureen, You are a pleasure to write for. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SeymourSweetie, this poem just got me all teary-eyed it was soooooo sooooooo beautiful every word... It's special that's what comes2my mind when I read your poem and I shall treasure this write you have shared with us... HugsNsmiles2uPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
But have not closed my heart to love. Or refused those dreams of you nor Stopped my wishing on stars above? Or closed my eyes to magic’s view Your poems always have a special magic to them, Sy...  ~ magic hugsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Coco, Thank you sweetie, Lyra, You are just a beautiful person. |
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