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mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

0 posted 2002-07-22 10:03 PM

You Trigger a Tear Endless
~~~~

Don't try to put on a brave front
and pretend you can bear to see me cry
.
.
after all these years

If you dare, look deep into the eyes
~reflections of my story of us

Can you see...
residue of a forsaken love
renewing the heart with
an eternal stain

Don't look away...
for did you just know
a tear can be triggered endless

Felt inspired to write this after reading Marge's "After All These Years" ~mycafe

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

1 posted 2002-07-22 10:10 PM

there is so much emotion here - so much powerful emotion - well written - powerfully said - loved it - Paul

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2002-07-22 10:10 PM

Wow........when you get inspired, you really get inspired. Powerful and full of the impact intended. The construction was a plus in this as it lends to the meaningfulness of it and the flow perfect....pauses in just the right places.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-07-22 10:11 PM

Very well done MC. Powerful writing, beautiful.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-07-22 11:41 PM

Beautifully written, Marie...
and oftentimes this sort of thing really happens in relationships

~ chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

5 posted 2002-07-23 09:33 AM

Paul, thank you so much for being the first to drop by, and for offering such wonderful compliments.

Mark, it's ever so delightful to hear from you. I really appreciate your encouraging words.

Gentle Spirit, glad to know that you've enjoyed the read *hugs*

Lyra dear, yes relationships are what that keep the heart, mind and soul very busy!

Thank you!

Keep counting your blessings

[This message has been edited by mycafe (07-23-2002 09:34 AM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-07-23 08:58 PM

Mycafe....you take your inspire,
and strike new gold...well done....

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2002-07-23 08:59 PM

Can you see...
residue of a forsaken love
renewing the heart with
an eternal stain

Marie, very well penned...i enjoyed the above lines particularly...succinctly and intensely said

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-07-23 09:19 PM

(smiles) Oh Marie, this is wonderfully said, sweet friend, I understand how you feel and my heart goes out to you and others who feel this way! (sigh) This is powerfully expressed, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

9 posted 2002-07-24 09:24 PM

Karilea, faterider, Noah ~ Thank you so much for dropping by *BIG HUGS*

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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