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Renewing
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Renewing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Renewing My body sits beneath a tree My mind flits over greenery. A flying spirits power muse Intoxicating as good news. It hovers o’er some blossoms fair Selecting with the greatest care Impressions of symbolic core To open up the wisdom door And in the sunlight I can see The magic of a golden key Sipping nectars common bail Simple truth that fills the grail I drink in all the colored hews To fill the essence of my muse Stirred with stamens yellow snow Just waiting for the wind to blow To act a midwife in it’s strife And bring to us another life. |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Good morning Seymour, A scintilating good write to start the day with. It's amazing what nature can teach us if we only watch and listen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bag123, Thank you for the read and reply, you got the message. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And in the sunlight I can see The magic of a golden key Sipping nectars common bail Simple truth that fills the grail I drink in all the colored hews To fill the essence of my muse Stirred with stamens yellow snow Just waiting for the wind to blow To act a midwife in it's strife And bring to us another life. ====================================== "Stirred with stamens yellow snow Just waiting for the wind to blow To act a midwife in it's strife" *smiling at you* you do know how cool those analogies, metaphor and images are dont you?  only you with that mind of poetic waaaay cool could come up with the idea of "stirred with stamen's yellow snow" and "act as a midwife" As always, your wit and word play teach us...with out ever preaching to us. Must mean youre a poet, huh? *L**winkiewinkie*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You made my morning. But then you always do. Tink did you get my Email last night? I'm asking because you always shoot me back an answer. I always worry about saying the wrong thing and I am so clumsy some times I trip over my own feet. I know you have a busy life but after all you are my Tinkerbell Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.  |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautiful... ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sy, you wax beautifully, again  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling here... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Email was received...Tink will be in touch |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Right back from the earth I salute you Sy! Good work! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful. The feel of this is soooooooo gorgeous, it feels as light as air and as gentle as a butterfly. I can feel this dropping into my soul with silent wonder, leaving me breathless and delighted. As ever you thread the day with beads of glittering dreams and leave it lying there for me to find. You know somewhere inside your pen there’s some magic dust because if there weren’t you’d never fill the pages with pure delight time after time. I love this utterly utterly it is purely YOU alive and vibrant quivering with vivacity and I love it utterly utterly love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Enjoyed reading this. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tiersdin, Thank you for the beautiful. Interloper, Just a little bee's wax. Sunshine, Smiling back at you. JM, Holding my breath. ethome, Thanks for the good work. Marsha, Dear utterly flutterly, you color my day with butterfly hews. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick You slipped in while I was answering. Thank you dear. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Nature is a wonder, as are you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie,, Thank you my dear, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I drink in all the colored hews To fill the essence of my muse Keep drinking deeply, Seymour. *S* Your muse is obviously happy with the consumption... and we're happy with the results! *S* This is wonderful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, LOL thank you sweet. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How beautiful, the images are very clear. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
SY! I found you!! Not that you were lost...I was, kinda. Took me till an hour ago to figure out everyone had moved on to Open 21!  Therefore I didn't get my morning read from my Sy! But...I'm here now and I can exhale.. and tell you how much I love this colourful piece. ~Afternoon Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Thank you dear. :ssqueeze: Enchantress, For a minute I thought I was lost. Glad you found me. Thank you for your constant read and lovely comments. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy, well penned sire, master works at work enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like my yearning for the tradewinds when they are missing...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, I thank you much. James, So glad you enjoyed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy y our read |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are lucky I finally figured out we were at Open 21 now....Otherwise you might not be getting to read this.... Another flowing piece of poetic luxury... Thanx Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, So glad you enjoyed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Glad you enjoyed, you are growing by leaps and bounds. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I'm late, as usual..I just love to creep in and enjoy a good cup of nature with you..Poetic sweetener for the soul.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rwood, A cup of nature is always good. Thank you for the read. |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
this read nice, but my brain didn't pick up what it's about. now i could read the other responses and find out what "others" think it's about, but i'd like to hear it from you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wormways, It's a symbloic way of discovering the oddities of life. Thank you for the read. |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
thanks seymour. my curse is prevelant at every turn. i seem to be unable to see anything the way anyone else does. and though this gives me a truly unique perspective on existance, i rarely can make sense of what other people mean when they express themselves in writing. at the very least, i find myself unwilling to guess or figure out what another person intended to convey, so i ask. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wormways, Common symbols are very hard to find since each person forms his or her own. One of the mysteries of life. Thanks again for the read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thank you dear |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may the spirit of true love and inspiration forever touch your heart and bring joy to you like butterflies forever! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*library* "filed under 'ess'" for soul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. Serenity, |
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