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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
I am a lover of words & simple flowers in rain, I wonder if theres a real me, or am I just this plain?! I hear the fairies whistling, on a tree not far away, I see there wings of splendor, & I sit in disarray. I want to feel again, to feel a love in vain, I am a lover of words & simple flowers in rain. I pretend that the words I hear, dont stop inside my heart, I feel those fairies step down, & carefuly take me apart. I touch that peace of heaven, right to Edens lair, I worry that will will never find such peace; yet this remains my prayer. I cry when I tremble; its a part of me I cant explain, I am a lover of words & simple flowers in rain. I understand that a picture is a song un-sung, I say my picture, is of a girl though to young. I dream that ones rapture will take hold of me, I'll try to remember that splendor for my memory. I hope that when you find me, I'll be easy to attian, For I am just a lover of words & simple flowers in rain... For in much wisdom is much grief & he who increases knowledge increases sorrow... Eccl. 1:18 [This message has been edited by MIdsummerRain (06-15-2002 05:02 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile...I think I knew ya? RIGHT AWAY, i STILL love the way you think. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I don't know what the challenge was but there is sure a lot of good lines in this piece. For I too am..."just a lover of words & simple flowers in rain... " Very nice! |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
~Serinity, my friend, I feel as though our hearts are the same  Yet, I belive that you are a goddess compared to me! ~ethome, Ah, aren't we all! Thank you for sweet words, my friend ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief & he who increases knowledge increases sorrow... Eccl. 1:18 [This message has been edited by MIdsummerRain (06-15-2002 05:49 AM).] |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
you're so good. *green with envy* it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
:::LauGHS whiLE shakING heR heaD::: I enjoy you MidnightSon, you make me smile! ~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see there wings of splendor, & I sit in disarray. I want to feel again, to feel a love in vain, I am a lover of words & simple flowers in rain. I pretend that the words I hear, dont stop inside my heart, I feel those fairies step down, & carefuly take me apart. I touch that peace of heaven, right to Edens lair, I worry that will will never find such peace; yet this remains my prayer. I cry when I tremble; its a part of me I cant explain, I am a lover of words & simple flowers in rain. ================================== this is absolutely lovely!!! so many wonderfully mystical lines!! a beautiful, bittersweet gifting of rhyme. I hope more of the new people will try this challenge..its been done several times in here and its always fascinating to learn more about fellow poets and see where they take this challenge...having the template format makes it very interesting yours is written whisper soft..an ethereal write of inner soul. nice to meet you...Im from St.Lou too You ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"For I am just a lover of words & simple flowers in rain..." This is so very beautiful! I love the way you express yourself. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
so the hideout for inspiration is in St louis, eh JM and rayne? forgot to put this in the library. it's just as enjoyable a second time around. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet Rayne, you are a true painter of words and I know you are always going to light these pages with your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rayne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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