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Weakened bliss
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Weakened bliss |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Weakened bliss, a fragile recovery among this weekend's purple blooms. Weakened bliss, a tasted discovery of summer fruit in empty rooms. Weakened bliss, the sandstone hues. Driving down the 405. Weakened bliss. Rainless blue. No sweetened tears among the sky. Weakened bliss, the waiting sunrise piercing gold, a silver song. Weakened bliss, the sullen surprise. No, she's not here. A distance long. She said burn ... together. -TON [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-23-2002 02:12 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Liked the way you wrote this. Nice thoughts to carry down the road. I ain't getting on the 405 if I can help it~ I'm heading down the canyon towards the beach. Oh sweet bliss!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bsquirrel An interesting write enjoyed the read. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
You always amaze me. Now get yr mopey head outta' yr mopey butt and be happy! Love you. Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
your love being a long way off..neat picture you painted here |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, all. And Lorigrrl, is it physically possible for me to --- never mind, don't answer that! (and for those confused, Lori-Anne is Anvrill, Lori Anne is BluesSerenade) Whoa, that's even more confusing! Um, when I say Lori, I mean Anvrill! I need a headache pillish thing. Enjoy the beach, Lori! (Lori as in Blues, NOT Anvrill) AAAAAGhhh! These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mike, love the way this travelled down the page just like down a highway....good stuff! ~Hugs~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
SOMEBODY is getting softy...  May you two always mesh so blissful!!! *Congrats Mike* she said mopey...to you...LOL...gotta be a keeper to put you in your place man!!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
No! No! Noooo! I'm mopey! I'm sad! I'm inconsolable! I'm invulnerable! Yeh, that's it. I'm a tower of strength and mystique! ...........okay, y' got me. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
"You are a tower of strength ... to me." So sang Wayne Hussy! Silly. Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, just like Dark Stranger, your words always make me feel like we're driving down a desert highway or U.S 101! (big hugggsssssss) You always are filled with highways of endless inspiration, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like the phrase "weakened bliss". It says so much. And the poem did travel down the highway with you. Really well done. Sandra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks. Fun fact: the first two verses is Friday. The second two is Saturday. The last two, Sunday. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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