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Heaven (tanka) |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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Higher than heaven floating up above the world While in your presence You're an angel to this girl My heaven is in your eyes... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (kisses) Awwwwwwww, I cried a tear reading this, you always make me so very happy! (kiss) You are heaven to me and you will always be the girl of my dreams, if we meet it will be like seeing heaven, you, in front of my very eyes! (kisses) I sure hope we get too, I LOVE YOU!!! (kisses) Now, GO TO BED AND DREAM THE SWEETEST DREAMS!!! (kisses) Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
What a sweet tanka. Well done. Nan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RosePetal I would say the arrow hit its mark. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rosey Posy darling girl oh my word this is just too too gorgeous, should writing ever be this perfect? girl? Hmmm? Always your writing is wonderful and this is superb darling girl   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Beautiful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It is nice to have a heaven on earth...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Tanka sweetie! ~Hugs from your sidekick!~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetal~ Very nice Tanka thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful tanka, love it!! ((hugs)) Charisma |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What a wonderful vision you have RP~ Delicate and dreamy and so full of love! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Joanna, I think you hit the ten ring with that one... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thank You for your kind replies, they mean so much |
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