Open Poetry #21 |
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Hearts On Fire (20 or less first attempt) |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
sensual touch explore lovers face eyes meet as fingers interlace passion burns hearts on fire bodies wanting indulge in desire * * * * * I have never done a 20 or less before and was inspired by Barry (Magnus) Suetang |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very passionate Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you always write such beautifully breathtaking poems and this proves you are wonderful with brevity as well! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
lots of passion Sue and the 20 or less really worked - Paul |
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