Open Poetry #21 |
Poets |
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Just a thanks by repost, for all the poets who write from their hearts, simply for the joy of sharing...you are family, and This is Home... Poets we have seen her write of up and up of elephants and deep desires we have seen her twirl and swirl and catch herself upon warm funeral pyres she takes a bit of twinkling line and twirls herself therein she does it with a certain dash ~ and takes it for a spin we’ve seen him, then, do the same in jest, then in chagrin he looses yet the in of him and we collectively catch our breath and wonder where he’s been he takes a bit of crinkling lines and curls around wherein he runs ahead, then makes a splash and takes us all with him the poets come to play and say and we read of right and wrong we catch our breath in butterflies and we cast our hopes in song we see a flag of red and blue it flies there, upon the wind we try to capture moments replete to share it all again but is the feel, the emote the one you feel which the poet cast in wrote does it catch the chest of you or is the read simply a glue that binds us all in this as one or merely stand as dandelions gold in sun something here for the day then in a puff, tomorrow’s play or were the words of him or her merely a thought cast down or did you read then read again and feel the lift of frown did you get one thing from them and in turn gift it back? did your pen take upon it verve and did you watch the sweep and curve of your own thoughts, perhaps, here, intertwined? did you then feel for a moment’s bless this poem, it could have been mine? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DecaFlame~ Lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
this is beautiful...and OH how I do relate to the last lines of this... Thanx Deca... |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
A beautiful tribute Decaflame, full of rich images that cause all to pause, reflect, and be inspired! Well said! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
DC....such a scene you make..(grin) enjoyed it both ways ms |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca Yes, yes and again, yes! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks deca for sharing this with us |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YES, and this is one of those very poems too I wish I had written, your lovely words always bring a smile to my face, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Thank you so much for being you, you are a delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I loved this one, Decaflame...I think we all have some of this in us when we post here at Passions. Its a very real description of a poet. ~ poetic hugs Lyra |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
wonderful post...pleasing thoughts... darned if you don't make sense sweetie!!! enjoyed this... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Amen... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Deca! And where was I when this was posted?? And....how could I miss such a magical, truthful write?! You KNOW I love this one! ...and I am keeping it! ~Hugs~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful work! I love the ending so much! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, and the ending so absolutely true. Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Awesome! She said burn ... together. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Deca... love the ending! *S* |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Beautiful writing Deca. |
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Cherokee Child Junior Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 13 |
she takes a bit of twinkling line and twirls herself therein she does it with a certain dash ~ and takes it for a spin Cool. I really like the pic too. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful write Deca, and I agree with CC, love the picture. I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Deca, stunning imagery both the poem and the picture. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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