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Open Poetry #21

Loves End

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2002-06-20 07:30 PM

L.istening to the truth in my heart.
O.pting to go my own way.
V.ictory will never be mine I know.
E.choes of a long ago day.
S.hadows of night are calling.
E.nding what could have been.
N.ever reality, only my dreams.
D.awn approaches, lighting my sins.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-20 09:35 PM

Awesome! That is all I can say.

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-06-23 05:45 PM

Like this...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-06-23 07:53 PM

Beautiful acrostic...nicely done...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-06-23 08:09 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kitty, this is so sad but wonderful, sweet friend, this acrostic is sincerw and excellent and reveals you so well! (sigh) I wish for loves beginning to sequel off that end for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kitty, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

5 posted 2002-06-23 08:57 PM

This is a wonderful, moving piece. Makes me think of several of my relationships. so simply, so to the point.

I like it alot.

Love,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

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