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Open Poetry #21

Smithy’s Fire

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-19 05:48 PM

Smithy’s Fire

I have been
long past
silver thin
between my seams
when I bent
you came in
to the very place
before I
did not allow
one
with me
you became somehow
fused together
changed in
smithy’s fire
white blue furnace
forged of
one desire
and the elements
of the metal
in which we form
cast our shape
dissolved together
as we transformed

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

elfin_tigress
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 101
Someplace

1 posted 2002-06-19 08:19 PM

Very nice illustration. The imagery and language suggests quite nicely other things aside from the mixing of metal.

A good read. Thanks!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-06-19 08:39 PM

(smiles) Oh Helen, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your heart forever melt happily with your loves in true happiness and shine with the flame of trust, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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