Open Poetry #21 |
Vibrations From The Woman In The Window Seat (Beside Me) |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
An ordourless flower pilfering scent, blossoms grease your dour air. Your legs flowing smooth for miles. Your ruby lips a la code. Piss on your mind's cell warden. Magnetic visions fill the steely blue. Outside, on endless seas, I profile you in lines of flux; I stare. Your defiant radiance charging, gliding through Van Allen's belt. Stare stolid bitch!.. I see your flowing hair across my crushed pillows. Aphrodite glowing sunset pink, crys out from a cushioned rickshaw "Hail this heaven! who opens your gate?" my helmuted soldier stirs to action............ The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
ethome I think those vibrations are all over you...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, I just love the descriptive beauty of your words, sweet friend, this is wonderful, I love the ending especially, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ethome, vibrations whew~now this is a side of you I haven't seen before. Very grown up as it were. There is nothing means more to me than |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Liking this side of you. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And now in this corner....THE NEW ETHOME!!! Wow! Eric...this has megawatt power.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric Edgy and electric, you let it out like fire. Nice to see you trying new on. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Hey this steamy poem should be in adult...haha! whew!!!!my monitor is steamed-up!!!!! you have a way of describing words from a different perspective... |
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