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moon of sighs |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I watch you climb above my eyes you are variegation colors of beryl blue and cobalt you hover at my mouth smile as evening star vesper you are sapphire and ultramarine I listen to the sounds of you moan sigh fabric rubbing wind I am monks cloth under doeskin you are wandering moon cashmere mistress of melancholy in vapor weft coquette of heaven some shelley has versed butterfly with thigh wings winded on sheets of indigo silked with white fire you are the dresden color, the isamine crepe de chine in governess of flood dance we laugh loud together quietly the tweed of your fingers stirs my steeping my hollow man is dampened to viscid humidity I am moorland on mountains of tomorrow like sheets of silk covered rorulent with slick you are blot paper inkless waiting to parch a huntress of the silver bow in watery recline I am animal skin shivering slight moments whisper in morning we will seep between ourselves we are as glass eye songs then ....... ©Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-19-2002 11:03 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I wanted to pick a favorite line... but I failed... too many to choose from... you succeeded... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am monks cloth under doeskin you are wandering moon cashmere mistress of melancholy in vapor weft coquette of heaven some shelley has versed How cool that is DS. Good morning, a cup of DS, and it never tasted so good. Well done hon. *s* I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
a real southern belles dream Dark Stranger. Very impressive words! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I am monks cloth under doeskin you are wandering moon cashmere" EXACTLY. A perfect combo of religion and spirit...you, are SO lovely....I sigh. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Like a soft silken tapestry I seeped into every thread savouring every word read Hope |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Incredible, I could feel the colors. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger An epoppe of abstract that melts the walls of the gallery. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine, thank you ms coffee morning...glad the lines touched your smile GS, thank you Donna, big hug to you. TexasRose, thanks for the Southern smile and the reply. Serene1, so pleased to have your read ms..you bless me. Hope, thanks for the poetess reply, you are a pleasure. Sandramoon....Thanks lady for wearing the colors so well with your eyes Sy, Arrigoto my friend, humble arrigoto |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing.. I lean forward... into the words... so as not to miss one syllable... not one delicious drop of Dark's morning. ~Hugs~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E.... you look so sexy leaning that way thank you for your eye touches on my embossed thoughts |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Dark - this poem touches so many romantic feelings that I can only bow to you and say well done and thanks for a powerful send off for the day!! Paul |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Paul, thanks my friend so pleased to have your regards |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...very awesome! Reading this was a bit like drowning and flying at the same time. I think I must be on sensory overload. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I watch you climb above my eyes you are variegation colors of beryl blue and cobalt you hover at my mouth smile as evening star vesper you are sapphire and ultramarine I listen to the sounds of you moan sigh fabric rubbing wind I am monks cloth under doeskin you are wandering moon cashmere mistress of melancholy in vapor weft coquette of heaven some shelley has versed butterfly with thigh wings winded on sheets of indigo silked with white fire you are the dresden color, the isamine crepe de chine in governess of flood dance =================================== oh man......................... poet sir with all the due respect you know I have.... you need to change the title to "moon of sigh"  have mercy.......me thinks me needs a cigarette and me dont even smoke roflDS this is outstanding....most impressive imagery and vocabulary...once again your verbiage takes the reader to the limits and titillates all our senses...very very cool write...this one goes in me library for future eye sighs  "It's not about having what you want ... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, that is such an image the drown and fly, wish I had said that thanks hon.. Janet Marie, Thanks for the idea will do that with the title..AND you are so sweet with the reviews, thank you so much babe |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
was it as good for you as it was for me?! I love how your thoughts meander all through the threads of your writings. There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ Abstract ... surreal ... fibers tightly woven in total mesmerize~ Got that Vanilla fragrance all over this one too~  'I am monks cloth under doeskin you are wandering moon cashmere mistress of melancholy in vapor weft coquette of heaven some shelley has versed butterfly with thigh wings winded on sheets of indigo silked with white fire you are the dresden color, the isamine crepe de chine in governess of flood dance' LOVE the 'crepe de chine'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
PhaChi, it is wonderful now, thank you for completion in that thought. Ms Marge, thanks lady friend for the read and sweet review |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I am moorland on mountains of tomorrow like sheets of silk covered rorulent with slick you are blot paper inkless waiting to parch a huntress of the silver bow in watery recline I am animal skin shivering slight moments whisper Oh..gosh..you've just given me a gem for me word fetish purse..all velvet and tied up tight..you know I love that word..let alone this verse. YES...you really are! Sincerely, Reg |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
as evening star vesper you are sapphire and ultramarine I listen to the sounds of you moan sigh fabric rubbing wind I am monks cloth under doeskin you are wandering moon cashmere mistress of melancholy in vapor weft coquette of heaven some shelley has versed butterfly with thigh wings winded on sheets of indigo silked with white fire you are the dresden color, the isamine crepe de chine in governess of flood dance ========================= nope....still cant hold memothy breath long enough to get past that second verse. TY for the moon sigh "It's not about having what you want ... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina, you gush me riverish with blush flatter skinends..I think I be all huggy for you now...thanks hon Janet Marie, You are annatto and mallow sides to my smile, thanks for the time you spend in your lovely replies |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
sheets of indigo silked with white fire.. Now there's a line I can get my mind around. *weg* As always, D... with your belletristic talent for inveigling you could even make the alphabet a sonnet of seduction. *wink* Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi thank you for attributizing my rampageous rancor on rambling always a pleasure to receive a wink from your side of the fence (grinage) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You truly are the King Of Morning, sweet friend, you and Seymour Tabin always seem to post such delightful works in the morning frequently that bring siles to my face! (big hugggsssssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Dark, Every time I read one of your works,I am stunned. Most compelling imagery, you seem able to impose your will upon the language, your obvious command of a most impressive vocabulary is not a tool that I own. I envy few, you have made a very short list. Thank you for this work. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks my friend...miss you in the early mornings..but enjoy your visits sir. Wranx, most humble appreciation to you, hope my work is always a worthy read, thanks to you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well--If the mountain wont come to the moth.....*wink* hey you??!!!!????? we miss your moon sighs around here..... been far too long poet sir.... must the moth beg??? heh |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
am monks cloth under doeskin you are wandering moon cashmere mistress of melancholy in vapor weft coquette of heaven some shelley has versed butterfly with thigh wings winded on sheets of indigo silked with white fire you are the dresden color, the isamine crepe de chine in governess of flood dance ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ this one is such an awesome offering... doing some late night library reading.. so glad to come across this again... high inspire poet sir. Thank you clarity ... thank you frailty |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I am animal skin shivering slight moments whisper in morning we will seep between ourselves we are as glass eye songs then ......." wow... I am so glad this one came up again! I hadn't read this before and whoa did I miss a gem!!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hmmmmm thank you ms jm... and you too ms sea |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you JM for bringing this up.. D? You outdid yourself with this one and I am glad I was able to partake. My favorite of yours. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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