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Streaming Wind
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Streaming Wind |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Streaming Wind By: Noah Eaton 6/18/02 Bronze bells ring above our heads Glass butterflies softly weld to the meadowbed Between the graves I am chiseling epitaphs to every one of your cenotaphs Of every dream you thought you lost but was always there under wraps Ah we're playing chutes and ladders Lucky I'm wearing my tam o'shanter It's no matter It doesn't matter No Mad Hatter can tamper with our manners Slip on your talaria We'll take flight like a kite Cause all you have to do is ease your mind to fight the moonlight We're streaming wind We're slip-sliding in With romantic whim Streaming wind... Take your needle and knit songs of gold Play your threads like a cembalo Trimming unicorn wings of dungaree Yarn-dyed, soldified, made for you and me... We're streaming wind We're slip-sliding in With romantic whim Streaming wind... Take my hand for love of Jove We'll make this jungle our abode And fill our world with dragonflies Purple honeycreepers, mint chocolate ice cream and fireflies I can be your Davy Crockett Just pack your bags, slam your worries door and lock it We'll be the king and queen of the wild frontier You proclaim that title for me when you are near We're streaming wind We're slip-sliding in With romantic whim Streaming wind... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-18-2002 11:05 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
How romantic!!!! This makes me think of my boyfriend Liam. *sighs*  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very sweet word play here M... *everybody say awwweee*  cute Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
Hi Noah~ You know how you get a song in your head...and you can't turn it off? Thanks for the words I'll be replaying for a while! This is very whimsical...I LIKE IT! ~Sydney McLean |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Noah, I like this one! The rhymes and repetitions and alliterations and all! Nan |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Noah, it's always wonderful to read your heart... *hugs* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Reads like quite a ride through the heart and soul then out into the universe. Nice write Noah! |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Noah- I love this!! It's beautiful and sweet and romantic...*hugs* Just beautiful! THanks for the sweet thoughts I loved this.. Tai |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, this is so descriptive and romantic. And very lyrical. Sandra |
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