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meadow dreams |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it was just a dream radiance in green and your dress was up high in the doorway you said we made love in a meadow and you wore gold that I placed on your skin you said I looked at you that way when you danced that my eyes burned your skin like sin when it tingles inside you laughed at my face how the dream made me want to make it come true you waited outisde the window in our meadow of dreams ©Dark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh my...wazzat you? *wink* hmmm...there was this field of daisies... how do you do this? get my mind so eager to wander? (tsk...I'll have to tell ya the daisy story, another time, I suppose |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
More of this...perfect summer reading... |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Tryst's of thought or actuality both powerful reasons to believe in the power of love. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes..Sunshine is right..please continue these. They make me feel glorious. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
serene1, thanks lady for the wave/smiles sunshine, good morning ms...so pleased to have your eyes on my offerings bags123....thank you and yes, I agree regina, thanks to you and I hope I can make you feel glorious often |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
subtly sensual... I like it! ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
MMMM yes D.S roll over and over in meadows of clover this one I truly adore can you hear me calling encore !!! Hope |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Scenes of beautiful dreams.....good work! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Tiersdin, humble thanks for the read and comments Hope, thanks lady, so sweet of you to visit EThome, thanks my friend for the review [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-10-2002 09:50 AM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
What a wonderful dream to have. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Smartchick, thanks to you for the read and re |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger You can't win them all. A subtle charmer. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS Your meadow dream is lovely...such a pretty place for love thoughts, yes? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ Pure vanilla~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
What a meadow!! I'd like to go there in my dreams. There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
in the air of dreams desire travels further to reach meadow skin Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sy, thanks sir, I appreciate your reviews ms martie, meadows are love grounds, and playgrounds too, thanx babe marge, bless you my dear for the review phachi, dream places without sides or tops or bottoms...just room to dream, thanks lady indigo, between the heat of of desert and the cool of mountains, that middle place, thanks lady |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow! Your writing really makes me feel! Great summer reading...more please? ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Perfect!!! Absolutely perfect!!!!!!! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchantress, bless you dear one for the touches, thank you so much loner, thanks for the read and reply, very much appreciated |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This has a certain sensuality...took me right there...James |
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MIdsummerRain Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 175St. Louis, Missouri |
I feel this; & I love the way I feel...~Rayne For in much wisdom is much grief |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
james, thanks sir, I appreciate you rayne, thanks for the eye word touch, bless you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) I have missed reading your lovely passionate reads so much, sweet friend, may you always hop through the meadows of your dreams with your love holding your hand skipping with baskets of flowers dangling from her waists! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Your words invite me to watch your dream with the sensuality control turned on high - wow - Paul |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Goodnight..thank you so much for the review and for the comments |
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