Open Poetry #21 |
binky bay |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
old boats, odd shaped corks bobbing in the bay making seal noises against old tires clouds with colds hover over head nose drip rain just enough to spot the glasses breeze people walk in from the water invisible 'til they touch and mess your hair as they leave light bulb with nerve stands nude there by the shed reaching between the limbs of a monterey pine tug boat belly growl duck swim trolling by the beer hall spits up its jonah 'til monday morning wrinkle man in a blanket with holes for head and arms rolling his own stagger dancing with the lady sea mercedes riders run through puddles children on a mission needing a fun fix waving money with both hands seagull stops to read daily news by a trash barrel mouth someone had fish & chips fresh from binky bay ©Dark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger This is an epoppe of your style. Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My how I love watching the world thru your eyes, Dark. Good stuff! ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sy, thanks my friend for the wave. enchantress, you always bless me would be lonely without your touch |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey D.S what can I say I enjoyed my stroll along the bay these images I often see but you write them so good in your poetry Hope |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS The images in this are outstanding, fresh and original. Really enjoyed reading it! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Hope.. was looking through your eyes ms...thanks for the thoughts in reply ms Martie, thanks for reading along, hope you didn't get splinters in your feet..you are welcome anytime ms |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: for some reason, this touched a recollect... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"mercedes riders run through puddles children on a mission needing a fun fix waving money with both hands seagull stops to read daily news by a trash barrel mouth someone had fish & chips fresh from binky bay" (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I just love this vision as I love all your visions, sweet friend, I was lucky to see much of the Californian oceanside last week, it is wonderful and it too made me hungry for fish and chips! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine, bless you lady friend for the eye touches noah, thanks my friend for the reviews, glad you liked it |
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