Open Poetry #21 |
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rowdy dow now |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
I'm goin' out to bout' with the loud town girl we'll wear no shoe spats to the backyard shivaree she'll be bendin' the air on her foot dance toes and startlin' up to wake the echo folk boys I'll be her pebblestone man, her chuckie rock roy but she'll say I'm a gem of first water, one she'll leave the sticky smell on night wind buttons when ol' shawondasee dances her round town she'll make the eddys swirl in their skin sides makes the chokedamp panting want more breathe she gets the reverine magnets in her lady wine like voodoo rags and bones she gets so naughty bad she says there ain't no mornin' for sleepy time when she gets the dusky night in her window eyes she'll give me smother valley lovein' songs will say my young man make her belly tickle fire when we go spill the zydeco at the rowdy dow now ©Dark it is all just dancin' |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very interesting. I like it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Thats quite a dance. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lone 23, thanx for the eyes on it, appreciate you sy, thanks my friend..my other self sneekin out |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Where did you say this backyard shivaree was? |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Nice 'n light, good beat, too! Cor |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Can't say when the last shivaree was.. I went to.. must be time for another... night dancin' can be summer sweat fun. ![]() ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
file' gumbo ma`ze chop, krio ben walk..king porter stomp baby..raizin baby... yes.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mz martie, is dow' the roa n behind the cyress..thanks lady cor, thanks for the foot tap wiggle enchantress..jus' awhile ago, you was there...come on back now..thanks Regina, we gots to do it dere' swamp song is de bad song we gotta do..thanks babe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is more than dancing, sir... this...is living! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This just splendid, yessir, be you coon-ass or no'. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Wow, I have missed your words so much, sweet friend, dancing at night must be so fun though I don't get to do it very often because I don't have someone to dance with! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
what a way to enjoy life Ds, way cool cuz dat's da way ya gotza do it! I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine.....thanks lady fair for the dip in the rowdy dow wranx, thanks for the review, very much appreciated noah, bless you my friend for your support GS, slow hugs lady friend, thanks |
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