Melt Me (inspired by Krawdad’s “Melt” )

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Open Poetry #21

Melt Me (inspired by Krawdad’s “Melt” )

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-17 01:19 AM

Melt Me(inspired by Krawdad’s“Melt” )

did you
know you
melt me
long past
your fire
flowing through
entwined around
to become
my desire
gentle warming
all aglow
thick beneath
my skin
angel’s wings
will have
to wait
till I
again taste
your sin

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-06-17 02:54 AM

I almost hate to comment on something so personal...if it's not? then that's a compliment too...intimacy abounds in this piece...and? intrigued by the "again"--

but if hunger had a voice? this would be it.

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

2 posted 2002-06-17 04:47 AM

a touch of orangne can calm the moment.
as you can see.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2002-06-17 04:33 PM

k...personal?...just a poem inspired by another poem...but if you liked it...i'm glad...h

ra...thank you for stopping by to read...h

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