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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-06-16 07:02 AM


Neglect
was easy
Time
was sweet
Neglect
was easy--
time was
heat...


Time was
bruise
upon concrete...
Time was
fools--
in pad of feet.


Darkness
in trajectory--
darkness
summons rest of me...


I am finger's reach of hand--
I am darkness--understand...

[This message has been edited by serenity (06-16-2002 07:09 AM).]

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-06-16 07:06 AM



The images I see with
so few words
filled my world...

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2002-06-16 07:14 AM


No I don't understand but I love ya anyway!

I did pretty good untill the end.
Love the format and the words that evoked such passionate meanings.....mine are probably not exactly the same as yours but close!

Have a nice day..........ET

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-06-17 02:04 AM


Took a few reads and a Rum and Coke...finally got it!  Love a challenge, K!

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2002-06-17 02:22 AM


e? I don't always understand either...tsk to me--sometimes? I don't listen to the lyric--even when I write them--I just dance.

know yanno.

redheart angrybraids
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5 posted 2002-06-17 04:43 AM


simply, as usaual. common ground.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


redheart angrybraids
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6 posted 2002-06-17 04:44 AM


simply, as usaual. common ground.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


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7 posted 2002-06-17 03:24 PM


then, keep listening to the music. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
8 posted 2002-06-17 04:19 PM


wait...I thought I was Darkness
k...you be it today I will do it tomorrow

cool stuff ms S

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
9 posted 2002-06-17 04:19 PM


Very cool stuff here.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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