Open Poetry #21 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
was easy Time was sweet Neglect was easy-- time was heat... bruise upon concrete... Time was fools-- in pad of feet. in trajectory-- darkness summons rest of me... I am darkness--understand... [This message has been edited by serenity (06-16-2002 07:09 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The images I see with so few words filled my world... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
No I don't understand but I love ya anyway! I did pretty good untill the end. Love the format and the words that evoked such passionate meanings.....mine are probably not exactly the same as yours but close! Have a nice day..........ET |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Took a few reads and a Rum and Coke...finally got it! Love a challenge, K! Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
e? I don't always understand either...tsk to me--sometimes? I don't listen to the lyric--even when I write them--I just dance. know yanno. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
simply, as usaual. common ground. Kindly, |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
simply, as usaual. common ground. Kindly, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
then, keep listening to the music. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
wait...I thought I was Darkness k...you be it today I will do it tomorrow cool stuff ms S |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very cool stuff here. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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