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The Poem |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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THE POEM thrown in the middle of the stream not knowing wich way to turn sometimes hanging in there for a while like a Sunday's rest then disappearing out of sight so quickly that one could wonder if it was even there leaving behind a feeling of uncertainty either praised or ignored it flows in the stream till the last breath of hope sometimes revived for a short time always seeking for recognition it vanishes in thin air at last yet its spirit remains the birth and death of a poem Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (08-14-2002 06:24 AM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah... so wonderful to read you... Regards, Sudhir |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Most all my poems are kinda dead...this was interesting gal.... |
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alterego Member
since 2002-02-23
Posts 113Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Good poem - very appropriate for the "turning of the page" time when someone posts a poem and then the Forum gets changed almost immediately and no one ever looks at your poem again -  Have a nice day.. ss Create something infinite today - Smile!!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ Good day to you fair poetess~  You've done your free-verse in fine fashion~ But then ... everything you do is fine~ Love it gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
it vanishes in thin air at last yet its spirit remains the birth and death of a poem I have to agree with Alterego here, Titia... this is the perfect poem for the turning of the page.... beautifully done.  `~ real cool hugsLyra |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
So many die so young. Dare we suggest a little birth control? |
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