»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #21
»
the coffee shope
| Open Poetry #21 |
|
the coffee shope |
|
|
desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx 
|
freshly brewed aromas and spicy jazz permeate the air around you drawing a sketch of life where the paint of love is yours to decide shapes objects and rhythmic swirls defined by no one and everyone smoky hazes of desire and lust broken only when the last drag is finished ----------------------------------- coffee grinds and seven am smokes light jazz on the radio people running in and out dashing to work like their life revolves around the clock instead of the coffe they drink People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard |
||
| © Copyright 2002 James Webster - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Bout time you showed up!  I'm liking this one...My mind did a little trick with the second stanza...a little play on words... both readings were nice! |
||
|
LRbaba Junior Member
since 2002-05-07
Posts 30Dallas, Texas, |
thanks des we'll put them inna file these are good'ns take a breath of texas air for me litnrod |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my, I know just how it feels because I go to Starbucks and other coffee shops a lot and it seems like a spirit roo almost, where time seems to swim with the java brewing! (big hugggsssss) This is a wonderful surreal feel of a poem, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
|
doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
sweet nephew of mine! yer in da book!! ha!!! thank you for these!!!! talk to you this weekend...  |
||
|
desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
wow thanks all hoping to post more for more aunt here so she can get some more poems together, but just hadn't had time to put pen to paper in a productive manner (other than work that is). hope to see more of myself too. I know! I think I'll go buy a mirror! People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
