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No Love At This Address
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No Love At This Address |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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When did you last tell me you loved me? When did my heart last skip a beat? When were we both consumed by our passion And basked in love's glorious heat? My mind tries to resurface those memories But they seem to be lost in the fray Oh how I long to hear 'I love you' I wish you could say these words today You used to live inside my heart The place you took as your new address How easily I would succumb Whenever I felt your warm caress But like an ember that has died in the fire So have the sparks between me and you There's such an incredible amount of distance And love has all but faded from view The bridges of love have been burned And no longer do you care how I feel Unlike when our love was brand new And my heart was yours to steal I sit here lost in my memories All alone as I stare into space In my heart there resides only memories Was I to blame for this gradual fall from grace? Suetang |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
All I can do is smile.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sue Ya got me going up and down like a yo yo between these two poems you just submitted....He he this is a nice composition. Lost love creates a strange beauty in the poet's mind....That melancholy reminisce....very good work! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is soooooo sadly beautiful, sweet friend, it makes me sad to feel the lost love but it is also soooooo beautiful to see you feel hope beyond the tears and I know you will find true joy that follows! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ I checked with the post office ... they said they had a 'forwarding address' for you .... '...Beneath The Lighthouse'  Coolers, gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wow - words that weave visions of the pain of a struggling soul. Thanks for opening your souls struggles - Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Gee Sue...I thought you were so much in love now you have me confused.... I hope that you really are in love and that this one is just a ruse a lovely poem anyway  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang So sorry for the sad, but enjoyed the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love comes and goes where it wishes... Love requires a certain seasoning... Confusing if we try to figure it out... Just let it flow...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
very well done. . .excellent words that can be related to very well. . . great work. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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