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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2002-06-16 11:58 AM

It's the feeling
I have got
Inside of my heart
I don't know
Whether It's for real
I don't know
If It's true
Or If I am dreaming
I don't know,
My heart says
Somethings else
That I can't figure out
What It is?
I don't know
What my heart say?
Iam just standing
and thinking
If I know
It's love
I don't know
What my heart says?
I don't know yet
I only know
There Is only one way
To this open road
I walked
I don't know why?
But there Is a feeling
A feeling I can't deny
It Is all In my heart
I don't know
what It Is?

[This message has been edited by vandana (06-16-2002 11:59 AM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-06-16 12:25 PM

Sometimes...it is best to just let it happen
as it comes....then you will know...

Thanx Vandana

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-06-16 12:40 PM

true, rationalising may just be a mechanism of putting things off..nice write

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-16 12:45 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Vandana, I have missed you so so much and your wonderful words, I too would follow Barry's advice, it helps not to let fear overwhelm and to kindly accept what comes and then do what it takes once you find out! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-06-16 01:23 PM

Thos feelings in the heart will become real sonner or later!
This is a delightful pensive write!

elfin_tigress
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 101
Someplace

5 posted 2002-06-16 02:53 PM

Very good. I like how the rambling style adds to the point. It's quite effective!
I hope you sort it out soon!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-06-16 06:41 PM

I really enjoyed the poem, Vandana...
don't worry about the feeling...you will eventually figure it all out and then a lightbulb will go on over your head and your will say " oh yeah......thats what it was!"

~ hugs for thought

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2002-06-16 06:57 PM

Well whatever it is…love or strong attraction…it’s a wonderful place to find yourself. I like the way you’ve expressed the feeling of questioning.

Everything is possible in the game of life
(Simple Minds-Promised You a Miracle)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-06-17 06:18 AM

You may not know yet but whatever it is definately seems to have gotten your attention...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2002-06-17 03:20 PM

indecision ends with a first look. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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