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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-08-14 01:20 AM


Rest assured the strengh you have given my heart.
Know that i care for you, and have no doubts about it.
This is forever.
And this heart eternal burns for you.
I know you care for me so, and I know this can make you smile
so smile on, my sister

© Copyright 2002 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2002-08-17 09:14 AM


Well, now, after reading in the light turquoise above...it's almost, "what the hey."

But, oh well, as I started reading this I was thinking, "What a wonderful troth of love for a wedding vow," then when I came to the "my sister," I thought, well maybe not, or just a tweaking of the end for when it was being used for a wedding or maybe even a proposal. But, so far, marrying one's sister is illegal. Well, in the U.S. anyway, I don't know about other parts of the world.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2002-08-17 05:01 PM


yea i used to world "sister" not so much in the literal sense, but to describe the kindred feeling one has for a female counterpart, who isnt necesarily blood-related
passing shadows
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3 posted 2002-08-20 02:37 AM


beautiful!
GOlDsparklESS
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4 posted 2002-08-21 01:36 PM


oh my

this is really beautiful.

all i can say is

i know.  

passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-12-31 03:10 AM



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