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Inside-Out |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Inside-Out ~*Marge Tindal*~ Across this morn of feathered adorn in quietude of serenity I took pause to wonder just who gifts such thoughts to me~ Then there came soft baring winds to buffet me about reached the chasm of my soul turning me inside-out~ And there they stood in joyous view as far as I could see The many faces of those who live deep inside of me~ Each one holding a vital link that binds me to my ink-of-think Individually apart ... yet together they make me who I am this day~ As each one joined in hand-held circle I felt such calming ease Smiling in recognition of gentle face that came to whisper love ... pure love in gifting of poetic grace~ To hold them all inside this heart seemed so selfish of me ... but when I tried to set them free they crawled back into the heart of me To live once more in inking-stain gently through my poetic refrain~ To stand outside and look within is to hope you understand what I mean when I say to you ... I didn't write this piece ... it was *gifted* to my hand~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
ah, tis so. Inside resides the poet, our hand the instrument of travel to the outside world. Lovely indeed. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge The many muses of Marge...the loved all clustered together in your care...are the lucky ones. So enjoyed this!  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Great Write Marge. Always speak so well from the heart. ThisDiamond |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very nice....enjoyed very much. DeaDiAmore |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge, I do believe I understand what you mean....for there are many times that I have been given...to then turn around and give in return.... Love this poem, such reflection and truth. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Marge...they are always gifts. It seems to me that we leave them as small treasures for others to find, to life a spirit, to guide a way... yes, gifts, indeed... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well Marge, I am so glad, this piece was gifted to your hand.Because it is so beautiful. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
is to hope you understand what I mean when I say to you ... I didn't write this piece ... it was *gifted* to my hand I truly understand this one, Marge... that is why you are so *gifted*  ~ poetic hugs...gifted to you tonightLyra |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Mage: I understand that you are so generous in sharing your talent with others! Betty Lou Hebert |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It takes a heart as big as yours to hold that crowd. *G* But I'm so grateful they refuse to leave you... for as they guide your pen, you give us treasures to cherish. *S* This is beautiful, Miss Marge of the Many Muses. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteRose~ Yes ... from those gathered within ... come the voices of our ink~ Thank you~ MartieSis~ You KNOW how lucky I feel that they are here~ They long to share the snippets of life~ Thank you sweetie~ ThisDiamond~ Thank you so much~ Dea~ Thanks ... I appreciate it~ Magnus~ And in 'writing the heart' we can release their words to all~ Thank you dear poet~ Karilea~ Indeed ... it is so ... and in the *gifting* it is returned~ *huggers* SweetSuzieQ~ Thank you dear friend~ Lyra~ You just give the nicest *hugs*~ Thanks lady~ BettyLou~ I try to share the gift with all who would receive of it~ And ... I am overwhelmed at the responses~ Thank you, my friend~ SweetSuthernGal~ Ah .. ya' just know how to perk up a lady's day~ Me love ya' dearly~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like that..."ink of think" line. Like this so much too.. "And there they stood in joyous view as far as I could see The many faces of those who live deep inside of me~" All good faces I must add and very creative faces! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thank you poet ... the gentle souls of deep-remember guide me where I need to go~ I feel so blessed with their 'homesteading'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gifted, I believe it |
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