the border line of blasphemy

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Open Poetry #21

the border line of blasphemy

desolation angel
Junior Member

since 2002-08-11

Posts 20
east coast

0 posted 2002-08-13 09:08 PM

(on the border line of blasphemy
because i love you
so much. too much,
perhaps.)

your lips
as untouchable
as the lips of midas.
your tainted grace, your
awkward mystique
as unreadable
as greek. the perfect,
full finish of your eyes
as unthinkable
as God's true size.

don't undress my love
you might find a mannequin:
don't undress the mannequin
you might find
my love
-bukowski

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-08-13 10:25 PM

In complete awe of this, and I LOVE the name!! Welcome to Passion...I look forward to more...

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

desolation angel
Junior Member

since 2002-08-11

Posts 20
east coast

2 posted 2002-08-14 05:07 PM

thanks :}

don't undress my love
you might find a mannequin:
don't undress the mannequin
you might find
my love
-bukowski

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2002-08-15 12:06 PM

Yes one can Love too much. It does blur the lines of reason and replaces air water and religion. Enjoyed.

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

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