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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
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0 posted 2002-08-13 06:20 PM


Tea Pot


It's a noisy 'nough function
this java bean reduction
So I've moved my wee grinder
far away from the minder
Now she won't hear the grounds made
but I've asked her in fair trade
Would you please find a new spot
for that damned whistling tea pot?




"Grab a pen, grab some paper, do yourself a little favor."    e

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-08-13 06:32 PM


Krawdad
Good write, enjoyed the read.

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-08-13 06:36 PM


Heh heh.
VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
3 posted 2002-08-14 01:22 AM


Delightful!  Keeping peace is a plus, so was the compromise reached?

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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