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Open Poetry #21

Wishing on a breeze

han_tigger
Member

since 2002-08-10

Posts 50
Thundersley, Essex, Uk

0 posted 2002-08-13 03:39 PM

Wishing on a breeze.

Sweeping the sky like a soft breeze touching your face,
Soaring the skys with such a pace.
The sweet smell of flowers filling the air,
The bees humming closer, as close as they dare.
The light sigh of breath by a warm summers sunset,
The rain dancing, showing life going on, to never forget.
The wave of a branch on the cool breeze,
The warm summers light, there just to tease.
The waves from the sea brushing the shore,
Splashing the stones with the slightest of roar.
The winds lightly carressing each of the trees,
Nector from flowers being collected by bees.
Warm summers days,
Many beaches and bays.
Palm trees growing upon every beach,
Outstretched hands, as towards the sky that we reach.
Deep blue seas, warm and clear,
The sun, dazzling bright and seemingly near.
Warm and subdued, by evening light,
The setting sun, soon to be night.
Viewing an island from quite afar,
Well away from each street and every car.
Wishing to be there with all of your Heart,
Wishing to go there and never to part,
A wish that will one day come true.

mestesa78
Junior Member

since 2002-08-12

Posts 24

1 posted 2002-08-13 04:06 PM

I like it alot....!!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-13 07:17 PM

(smiles) Oh Hannah, this is beautiful, I love it, may you always go drifting happily on lifes sweet breezes and find all the peace your heart desires! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hannah, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-09-04 12:38 PM

Hannah,

Mike

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-09-08 04:41 PM

Hannah, your e-mail's full.

The smiley face means your poem made me smile.

Mike

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-12-31 03:12 AM

one day, yes, hopefully soon

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