Open Poetry #21 |
DId You MIss Me? |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Did you miss me? While I was away From me Did you sang this song? Yes I have missed you Through lonely misty nights No arms that won't hold me tight The stars that were covered By the clouds Did you miss me? That now You are longing for me to hold you tight When Iam home Did you miss me? Yes I have missed you so I was dying to see you again That day When I left home I felt lonely And was thinking of the times of you and I And wanted It to come back to you I missed you so So that was only my heart would find a way to get me back home and lonely days would end So Here Iam Asking you Did you miss me? Yes I have missed you [This message has been edited by vandana (08-12-2002 04:57 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can imagine some kind of Lisa Loeb music with this one to make it a song...very nice. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Vandana, this is soooooo beautifully heartfelt, I am sure your love misses you and I hope soon you find all your heart desiresn and have it close forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Missing can be very intense at times...James |
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Nazera29 Junior Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 34Connecticut |
this poem shows your intense feelings, and i think we can all relate to this feeling of longing to be with someone again. you showed us all your willingness to share these hard feelings. great job *We are the hero in our own story* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vandana, very nicely done....surely they have missed you as you have missed them.. And I hope he comes to you soo... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The answer is YES. I have been away from the board for a while. And I really did miss you! |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Great words.. I also always miss someone .... Keep writting.. 'good Luck' Secretlife (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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