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Desinty's Muse
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Desinty's Muse |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I am destinys' muse I shall travel through your thoughts when you least expect me My lips you shall feel, lightly caressing you in sleep my hands hold you in warmth as you awake. I am destinys' muse my words to you shall never be forgotten your words to me shall not remain unanswered, nor uninspired. You are fates' magic charm you shall come to my deams when I least expect you your lips I shall feel awakening the suffocated heat of me Your hands trailblaze through my heart You are fates' magic charm Your words, created on a flame extinguished to a shimmering ember shall be reborn in destiny's time We are destiny's fate when chance allows us to once again meet in our travel through time heavens shall remember and faeries will play for us our song. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (08-13-2002 08:00 AM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Muse, No clues, Demanding Understanding I don’t think that’s so For where ever I go I muse at my destiny, And I guess it muses at me, No charm has been given by fate, Nor is expected at this late date, I worry not and don’t bother to choose. Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, You still believe in faeries. LOL Wonderful write.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well, I believe in faeries! This is wonderful and full of magic Sandra! Loved the read. ~Hugs~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
You are fates' magic charm you shall come to my deams She is fates magic charm. A lovely name for that which brings us inspiration. A great poem Sandra. Enjoyed. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is wonderful, and I know destiny will bring you to your muse and everything will be magical to you and faeries will sing to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-13-2002 02:39 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
AHA! So you're the one |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Destiny whether in the dust of faeries or not shall speak when it wishes to and oft times it speaks for us in muse....you convey this quite well and you cadence was right on and the punctuation and line breaks added much to this piece as they were perfect in placement. Well done, much enjoyed. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra, I like the feel of this poem and how you have given us such a mystical treat. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, WOW!! SO much beauty and fantasy, and you have captured so many facets of every emotion. I can relate to this one perfectly!! Magnificent...... Love, Elise |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the fantasy feel of this write, Sandra... And I do believe in faeries... ~ fantasy hugsLyra |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Enjoyed the mistic sense of this. |
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