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‘Deer’s Birthday Wish a duet by the Mushettes aka Emma and Krissy
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‘Deer’s Birthday Wish a duet by the Mushettes aka Emma and Krissy |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
‘Deer’s Birthday Wish a duet by the Mushettes We’ve joined together just to say Have a really Happy Birthday You bring such fun to this place With your style Wit and grace Just for you We’ve joined together To write these lines, just a few Although it took forever Her words don’t dance they refuse to sing They don’t leap and fly They don’t do anything Krissy can’t write that we all know So I’m here To help the words flow For you deserve the very best And Krissy can’t write As well as the rest Spouting off that rot She’s lying as usual but I am not Your writing deserves my Utmost respect I’m left in awe You write so well That your words just soar See I can do rhyme My little sis And now get out of my Way while I give ‘Deer a kiss Happy Birthday ‘Deer You are a prince of poetic light And I thank you for Your constant delight Krissy darling sips just say your piece And your awful writing Simply cease ‘Deer we both wish you a great day So together we chorus HAPPY BIRTHDAY Krissy and Emma And while thy willing soul transpiers at every pore with instant fires Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 [This message has been edited by Krissy (08-11-2002 05:52 PM).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Now, girls, don't you know fighting over 'Deer just won't do? Birthday greetings with smiles must please our Balladeer, 'tis true! His laughter must be heard as he reads your every word! Charming, girls...you'll cast smiles all over the blue walls with this ditty...[This message has been edited by Lady In White (08-11-2002 09:23 AM).] |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Look out world! It's the dynamic, rhymatic duo! ~insert superhero theme music here~ Even tho you may differ as to who among the Mushettes is the 'True Poet', you both bring that loose thread together in a knot of praise for a fine fine poet: Balladeer Not just a birthday wish, Mr. Balladeer, but also we all say Thank you! for gracing us with your time, words and wisdom. Krissy gal, hope you are doing well. We think about y'all there all the time and want to hear about how school is going when it resumes, ok? *s* Be good, love well, and learn life with your heart. jeff |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Counting the Reasons - A Birthday Poem for Balladeer I think I will stay home today and celebrate your birth -- examine all the reasons why God put you here on earth. I'll count the reasons one by one, and count them once again, the first one is so obvious -- to hold your fountain pen -- That's reason one, I guess, my 'deer, that God has put you here -- to write fine verse and bring to light life's circumstances clear. But there are oh so many more -- my counting's just beginning-- The ball's been pitched and I am at the top of the first inning. Your spirit, heart and honesty, are reasons two, three, four -- but, Michael, I've just started, there are oh so many more. Your kindness and your giving nature, reasons five and six -- this counting could go on all day, that's what my heart predicts! This is the top of inning number one, with eight to go -- I could be counting 'til the winter when it starts to snow! I took just one day off from work to count and celebrate -- I think I'll have to call my job and tell them I'll be late! One day to count is not enough -- I'll need to take vacation -- these words are just a small attempt to show my admiration. I better stop this poetry, return to counting reasons -- before the summer fades to fall and God changes the seasons. Happy Birthday, Michael |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Is this a new day of Deer Season..... My, Michael.....have we had another day come into our lives to remind of us who we are....??? Happy Birthday Michael....And Krissy/Emma... You obviously are sisters......your words say it so well..... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Happy Birthday to you you live in a zoo ROFL, just had to say that, being that you are known as "Deer" Hugs Sandra |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You girls sound just like me and my sister, but you did a great job on the poem. Happy birthday, 'deer.  Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh Girls ... You give us a sisterly smile... with enchanting verse that walks a fair mile~ All across the pages here filled with love for our friend ... Deer~ Let me join right in the fun and send a greeting to our beloved one~ Deer, sweet deer I hope you know it's true I wish only ... the Spammiest Day for you~ Happy Birthday sweetie~  *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krssy, A delight to read and I'm sure he will enjoy this write.  for all of you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Krissy, This is such a delight... and I am sure 'Deer will love and enjoy this as much as the rest of us! ~Hugs~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL … I wish I could see the grin on Michael's face when he reads your post Krissy and Emma … he will be delighted!!! I'm grinning away myself here ladies!  Dear Michael, I would be remiss, If I did not extend a kiss, These lovely ladies started it … I'd like to join, if they see fit.  Now if you wouldn't mind, my friend, There's something else I shall append; I'll add a hug across the miles, For all you are … for all your smiles.  Thank you two, for the wonderful read ... Best Wishes to you both, and a Happy Birthday to Michael! /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (08-11-2002 11:40 AM).] |
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LRbaba Junior Member
since 2002-05-07
Posts 30Dallas, Texas, |
rue the day yes, rue the day see, that's what I'm trying to avoid-- reposts [This message has been edited by LRbaba (08-11-2002 01:54 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great and fun duet - you 2 write this well making big smiles across the miles - thanks - Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This reads like ever sheer delight to see these poet sisters fight I know they must be pretending today but sincere is their wish for Michael's birthday Happy Birthday Michael...and I hope that this is your most wonderful year ever.  ~lots of birthday from Lyra the  Lyra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Happy Birthday, hope it finds you in good health and makes all your wishes come true. M |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Two Mushettes, aka Emma & Krissy Got themselves today real busy They wrote a poem for this 'ol' Deer And wrote it a bit in his way I fear They nagged each other like he does Toe And it was such fun to read you know Keep it up girls this poem was real good It sure will bring this old Deer in the mood Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Emma and Krissy A pleasure to read this sisterly birthday poem...I'm sure he will love it. Happy Birthday, Michael!!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krissy and Emma, your poem's a fine mixture of copper and zinc to wish happy birthday and show how you think I don't want to remind you or even be crass - mix those alloys together you end up with brass you've given something to Deer that he won't forget your jointed effort is the best I've heard yet my final comment I'll give you a hand to wish happy birthday, you've brought the brass band. HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEER! (I'm saying it loud because at your age...) Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (08-11-2002 05:48 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) O' Krissy and Emma, can't you see all this sibling rivalry is tearing your mom apart? Oh, that's right, she's in it too! LOL! Anyway, I really loved this beautiful duet, you two are both outstanding writers, now kiss and make up! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Krissy and Emma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Really a very cute Birthday wish but he is not getting mine until 11:59 p.m. PST on August 18th. LOL, 11:59.99 maybe even! I pass this way but once so I hope to meet you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Oh heck... he should get them all week long. Happy Birthday, Balladeer! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, you two are a real piece of work!!! LOL! This is wonderful and the way you two banter back and forth with each other is humor at its very best! What a team all three of you make Thank you for this wonderful display of acknowledgement to this ole broken-down balladeer who is fading rapidly with the passage of time. This one goes into my favorites to live forever....  I'll read it again on my birthday....the 18th |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
So I'm guessin that our deer is a virgo too eh??? You two have outdone yourselves here...love the sisterly play back and forth...makes me miss my 300 mile away sis...~sigh~ very cute. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Belated felicitations, Michael Happy Birthday, my friend! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Deer a Virgo? I think not - He's a Lion And sizzlin' hot! *G* Krissy and Emma: Usually when I read a duet, I'm pleased when I can't tell what lines were written by which author for I think a duet should be seamless. *S* But in this case, the lack of harmony is what makes such a fine duet! LOL This is delightful. *S* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you all for all the early wishes and you, Suthern gal, for setting the record straight...Leo all the way!  Not your fault, devina, the dynamic duo had the date a little early. It's the 18th... |
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