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We Need Those Few
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We Need Those Few |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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We need Those Few The wonders of the human mind Perplexes mine of common kind I cannot understand the sequel Or proverb that we all are equal I do not understand the sail Or the enigma of the fail How can this gifted species brain Build Frankenstein’s of lover’s lane. Puzzle out the stars above And flunk in common grades of love. Tinker within a personal lust And let his earth turn into dust. How can he live in times disgrace To leave his mind far out in space He surely is insane in main Or cannot see his nose in plain. He lets demands run through his hands To late the patches of his plans Blind justice is the scale of change And change will simply rearrange. But he will say a fine goodbye Extermination and I sigh. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
You are pretty much incredible |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What Toerag said and more!! Enjoyed my morning read with my cuppa. Mmmm, morning hugs to your Sy! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes I fear he will go out with a bang....(and geez I need some sleep, I'm reading innuendo everywhere!) and yes...you are incredible.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Incredible and expendable. LOL Enchantress Morning hugs to you and I up you some  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Then we should do the innuendo dance. Good morning love. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Did you really mean to take me as far as this to thoughts of string lean and what they do amiss? Just chewed the meat without the fat biochemics are just like that... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I cannot understand the sequel Or proverb that we all are equal =================================== How can this gifted species brain Build Frankenstein's of lover's lane. Puzzle out the stars above And flunk in common grades of love. Tinker within a personal lust And let his earth turn into dust. ==================================== He surely is insane in main Or cannot see his nose in plain. ==================================== Blind justice is the scale of change And change will simply rearrange. But he will say a fine goodbye Extermination and I sigh. ===================================== YEAH..what Toe said times Infinity!! and add in waaaay tooooo cooool for schooool  So many clever lines in this Stinky... love it when ya say the word play this way  He surely is insane in main Or cannot see his nose in plain. Blind justice is the scale of change And change will simply rearrange. Ya took the old and made it new and made it a cool tool. Wisdom Rhymes divine...oh how I love your poets mind  If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sir sy, you make wordfly with whet wit whim and saunter saged soothsigh enjoyed this guy!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You have more than two eyes....and alot of sense! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I'm stealing Toe's comment. You are incredible. Enjoyed. There are a million messages, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, True but I still love you. JM, And oh how I love my mothy me. WWRS DARK, A true comp, thanks amigo. Martie, You are a love. WhiteRose, Thank you sweet thing. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sy, you are remarkable. It's just that my remarks could not do you justice  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
There is truth in what dear Martie said, Sy You must be a creature of more than one eye for through human nature, you seem to see Do you hide with a telescope, in a tree? Somehow, in all of the words that you write your slant on the universe is always right you know the world like the back of your hand oh what I'd give to be where you stand you have an incredible font of knowledge so much more than I learned in college please keep on writing, I love your lines through them, your intelligence shines  ~ hugs from a striped rodent who loves your poetryLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper The justice you see is enough for me. Thank you friend. Lyra, You are a precious friend. And a dividend. And your poetry a delight. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'We Need Those Few' who *sigh* in poetry, like you do~ Thank you gentle poet~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, I always look forward to reading your magnificent works. You are a true genius. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Tender as a babies breath. Marti, Better I be a good genie, to fix some of the ills, thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Yes, I hear you, we need more of those few that don't treat love like a papparazzi or alter its doctrines who can set an example for us all and teach our children and their children how to love truly! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great poetry - so much said and so well said - I loved it - Paul |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
My, what a crazy beast he is He thinks it all is just more bis' "I know it's spo's to be this way" He'll say until his dying day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah you always write a good reply. Paul, thank you for the nice comment. Goodknight Exactly, thank you. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart your ability to write leaves me gasping with delight, YOU never ever disappoint me. Once again the teacher speaks and I sitting here at your feet sigh as I listen and maybe learn. I could sit and drink at the fountain of your wisdom from dawn to moonset, and still I would find you infinitely fascinating, I would garner knowledge in your garden of wordy delight. Shower my soul in your voice and let my mind tread the ways of truth you have mapped. I’d spin the moonbeams into a cloak of silver, which I would lay over your shoulders to illume the nights darkness. This is superb and I love it utterly utterly utterly Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Once again you delight my night. I hope things go right to see you soon. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You keep wowing them, Sy.....nice work |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tis true Sy. How can we be so smart and so stupid at the same time? Caring and creative wirte. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Glad you agree, |
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