Open Poetry #21 |
Shoot! How did it happen???? Missed 5000 |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I missed my 5000th post...it was 4976 just a moment ago, and now, in reply to "Your Key" it was 5052. Darn!!! So to commiserate, here's an unfinished poem, unless I'm able to tack on an ending in the moments here: make lazy, fat birds, when we hang thistle seeds from the eave? or do their wings flap in rapid enough succession to cause the consumption of calories galore resulting a slimness to their svelte selves evermore? can we get the skinny on this fat chance? ©August 10, 2002 yep, finished, 'cept a title, how about "Fat Chance" oh, I'm such a bird-brain Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (08-10-2002 12:01 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Virginia.....I think you are cool..... And I think the title is appropriate.... A grin it brings...and leaves.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Not a bird brain at all.....what counts is that you are here and sharing and that makes it more special knowing that you can get lost in the poetry that way. Maybe a better reflection of celebration after all. Btw...I think "Fat Chance" would make a great title for this one. Congrats on the 5000 plus and smiles for knowing you enjoyed the poetry in here enough to get lost in 40 plus moments before realizing. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, you two! you have given you leave Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Virginia from Oregon - you're sweet, it shows in this write... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Yay!!! Oh Virginia, congratulations on 5000, YAY!!! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we're all sooooooo proud of you, believe me I love birds so so much too, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing! May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Congratulations Virginia.... You made it! So what if you went a little beyond.... it just shows how much you love this place. I think you can officially celebrate 5000 posts And your poem is adorable....keep the title as Fat Chance...its a great poem and a great title. ~ congratulatory hugs from annoying rodent Lyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 5000 POSTS!! Love this one too Virginia! ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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