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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-08-10 08:40 AM



I can’t close my eyes
any longer
for the burning images
of my past
those frightening
dark memories
only covered
by a thin shroud
of happiness
I am so scared to dive
through the surface
of forgetfulness
so very very scared...

Please...
let someone catch me
when I fall...


© Copyright 2002 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-10 08:50 AM



You will never fall, Neeraja...
that an angel won't be close by
to catch you...


Magnus
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2 posted 2002-08-10 08:58 AM


The fall, though frightful
is short and not very far
to allow something delightful
to come upon a blazing star.

Fear not the fall, for we are here
Fear not dear one, fear not the fear

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2002-08-10 12:01 PM


Neeraja - if you should happen to fall, my guardian angel will be there to catch you...


BC

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4 posted 2002-08-10 01:02 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is sooooooo heartfelt, sweet friend, I love it, I too know with all my heart there is someone who will be there to catch you as His love will always have a plan! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-08-10 01:06 PM


Neeraja there are angels among us who were put here to give us strength when we need it.....many of those angels are here at Passions....
they will catch you.  
Supporting hugs to you.....
Sincerely,
Donna

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
6 posted 2002-08-10 01:07 PM


Your safety net is right here at Passions, Neeraja...
If you fall...we will all catch you...
I loved your poem.
~ hugs from chipmunk friend, ready to catch you

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
7 posted 2002-08-10 02:10 PM


You are all so sweet.... it means a lot to me!!!  I'm riding a "bumpy road" right now... but it's a good feeling that there are people who care... and I'm sure I'll survive!!!

to all of you!!!

Neeraja

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