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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-09 10:08 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2002-08-09 10:12 PM


Marge, this leaves me breathless! I just love and adore it.

You are brilliant my dear friend.

Love ya, Marti

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2 posted 2002-08-09 10:12 PM


Oh Marge, I just love the waterfall. And, the poem is beautiful.
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3 posted 2002-08-09 11:33 PM


Marge:  Spectacular poem!  The picture is a nice compliment to your words.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-08-09 11:37 PM


grinning and biting my tongue here---oh my, there's just SO MUCH I could say--but I will leave me personality out of this, and just tell you how lovely this really is. When we first moved here (on the park) my kids were amazed. I will never forget (it's engraved on my mind) the day they startled an egret, nestling in the tall grass, there by the pond. As it flew off in slow motion, my son turned to me and eyes wide, exclaimed, "Did you see the angel flying?"

Thank you for reminding me. Life is really full of grace, if we only pay attention.

*hearthugs* Marge!

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5 posted 2002-08-10 09:42 AM


Beautful, a waterfall is such a wonderful sight, too.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-08-10 10:28 AM


Thank you all so much ...
this beautiful photo was taken at Yellowstone~
It just spoke to me of the serenity we seek and are often fortunate to catch it catching us~

Marti~
Nah ... but if you want to think so ...
I knew you'd enjoy it~

SweetSuzieQ~
The falls are a blessing of nature that calls my name~
The float on Eagle wing is a tour they haven't commercialized~
Thank you dear~

BettyLou~
In gentle glide ... I seek the homing spirit~
Thanks lady~

Serenity~
You 'know' that I never use the word without thinking of you~
Isn't it a beautiful remember when angels see angels ?
Thank you ... catch a flight~

CatalinaMoon~
Ahhhhhhh, the falls whisper a language all their own ... such force ...
yet such gentle touching of spirits release~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2002-08-10 04:20 PM


Hello,
I enjoyed your verse very much and the picture therewith complements its aspect very nicely. A pleasure.

Essorant

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8 posted 2002-08-10 05:15 PM


Absolutely beautiful Marge!
Amazing how you do this poem over picture..
They are so lovely.
~Hugs~

Marge Tindal
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Essorant~
Welcome to Passions~
Thank you ... glad you enjoyed it~

Enchantress~
Thanks gal ... I do have sooooo much fun with the inspire of the photos~
I'm so pleased that you enjoy them so much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2002-08-11 11:33 AM


How do you do it!!! It's simply short sweet and amazing!!!!

Kristen

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11 posted 2002-08-11 06:55 PM


Kristen~
Oh, thank you so much~
I only lay claim to 'recepting' thoughts~
Glad to know you enjoyed it so~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2002-08-12 09:55 AM


Beautiful!

Krissy
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13 posted 2002-08-12 10:09 AM


Auntie Margie girl this is stunning writing, I’m so glad I got a chance to reply to this. Absolutely stunning image, and the words I swear you are incredible, not a syllable out of place, this is awesome writing and I love it, and I wub you too

Five weeks my favourite auntie just five weeks x


love and warm stuff
as always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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14 posted 2002-08-12 11:32 AM


Marge - this is just beautiful and so inspiring - loved it - paul
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15 posted 2002-08-12 12:36 PM


InterLoper~
You know I appreciate you~

Krissy~
Thanks hon ... I, too, am counting the weeks~

Paul~
Thanks so much ...
To 'inspire' is akin to soaring again~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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16 posted 2002-08-13 10:54 AM


I've seen eagle flight
Sun shimmers of gold
I've touched waterfalls
That filled my soul
Far away moments
Rush into my mind
As I read this treasure
I happened to find.

This is beautiful, Marge... *S* Just what my morning needed... what my spirit sought. *S*

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17 posted 2002-08-13 11:43 AM


I love this poem.  It reminds me so much of my father and his love of nature..  
Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2002-08-13 12:33 PM


SweetSuthernGal~
Ahhhhhhh .... spirits touching~
We have no doubt of the connection ...~

Mestesa~
Welcome to Passions~
So pleasing when a poet can flip a page of remember for another~
Thank you for letting me know~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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