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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Moment Take this moment present now be it simple or be it grand and hold it gently in the strength of your hand but hold it firmly too it flows like sand |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Ok, giving me those damn chill bump things that I hate...lol. Feel like I just opened a fortune cookie. Advice heeded. Shape...how'd ya do that so perfectly and still make it work? Very cool. I am honored to have inspired this. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
your moment is a butterfly kiss in time flies so high |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Your inspire...inspired. Thanks. btw....critique line cool, good thing they're more important, since there are so many more of them. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wise words! |
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