Open Poetry #21 |
The Man Of My Dreams |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Weren't you and I once lovers In another time and place I had a feeling of deja vu When I saw your handsome face Weren't you the one who held me When my world was falling apart And stood right there beside me Helping to mend my broken heart Didn't we walk along the seashore And stand together in love's embrace I remember how the sun's reflection So beautifully lit your face I remember so much about you But are you really the one Who made this girl into a woman As we made love in the sun My mind so often wanders Sometimes things aren't what they seem So I'll just wait for Mr. Sandman To take me to the man of my dreams I am in motion |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a wonderful dreamy love story - Oh Sue you do it so well here - loved it - Paul |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah dreams, where all is possible. Enjoyed the flight. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
:kiss; (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe dreas can come true, for I have been dreaming of my woman since I was 12 and now for almost a year I have known my sweetheart Joanna and am only one bold step away from having her! (kiss on cheek) I wish for sweet love to always make you happy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A wonderful dreamy write Sue! Well done! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh I like this dream, Sue... and I think it has probably come true for you. ~ hugs and applause Lyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dreams are what reality is made of.... And your dreams all can very well come true... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I loved this....Hugs, Marti |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sue, I really love this! I'm sure that you already know that I'm an overly romantic dreamer waiting for the same thing...yes, I truly believe Well expressed~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Beautifully romantic, Sue! marie Keep counting your blessings |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
May he come and get you...James |
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