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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-08-09 07:09 PM


Weren't you and I once lovers
In another time and place
I had a feeling of deja vu
When I saw your handsome face

Weren't you the one who held me
When my world was falling apart
And stood right there beside me
Helping to mend my broken heart

Didn't we walk along the seashore
And stand together in love's embrace
I remember how the sun's reflection
So beautifully lit your face

I remember so much about you
But are you really the one
Who made this girl into a woman
As we made love in the sun

My mind so often wanders
Sometimes things aren't what they seem
So I'll just wait for Mr. Sandman
To take me to the man of my dreams

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Goodknight
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Ohio, USA
1 posted 2002-08-09 07:11 PM


a wonderful dreamy love story - Oh Sue you do it so well here - loved it - Paul
RSWells
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2 posted 2002-08-09 07:13 PM


Ah dreams, where all is possible. Enjoyed the flight.
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-08-09 07:16 PM


:kiss;

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe dreas can come true, for I have been dreaming of my woman since I was 12 and now for almost a year I have known my sweetheart Joanna and am only one bold step away from having her! (kiss on cheek) I wish for sweet love to always make you happy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-08-09 07:20 PM


A wonderful dreamy write Sue!
Well done!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
5 posted 2002-08-10 04:15 PM


Oh I like this dream, Sue...
and I think it has probably come true for you.
~ hugs and applause

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-08-10 05:37 PM


Dreams are what reality is made of....

And your dreams all can very well come
true...


NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
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A Mountain Paradise
7 posted 2002-08-10 08:13 PM


I loved this....Hugs, Marti

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
8 posted 2002-08-10 09:30 PM



Sue, I really love this!  I'm sure that you already know that I'm an overly romantic dreamer waiting for the same thing...yes, I truly believe   Well expressed~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
Posts 584

9 posted 2002-08-11 10:16 PM


Beautifully romantic, Sue!

marie

Keep counting your blessings

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2002-08-14 04:55 AM


May he come and get you...James
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