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scrambled eggs |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I would like an omelette, please? with bacon-bit hash-browns... give to me in one neat square, on the side italics dare they must be the bread of me, warm and golden, piping hot... give to me, what I have not... Just let me, place an order--please? I just want the "white" of egg, toss the yolk from shell to shell-- mix it twice by fork turned thrice-- pour it--pan plays flute of hell. Toss the mushrooms that you hate and the swiss that would not grate-- tomatoes in a dice of greed... liquid ran, releasing seed-- "Let me place an order please?" Then serve me scrambled eggs. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Italics dare now why this is there, I'm not sure but it's the part that keeps ringing out... enjoyed this, Serene one... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hehe...got that ol' mrs shirt on and are turnin in them orders of special huh? well love since I am so concerned for your health and many years together... here is your quarter slice of bland wheat toast and the tofu cereal you love so much...be sure to drink the 12 glasses of water I provided and I will be back soon for our 5 mile power walk...we gotta be done before 6am so you don't get the car exhaust fumes... mmmm kissy kissy sweet bride... (grin) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-09-2002 09:36 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I just want the "white" of egg, toss the yolk from shell to shell-- mix it twice by fork turned thrice-- pour it--pan plays flute of hell. ------------------------------------------- OH I am liking this Serene one! Ooooooh Yeeees!! Excellent write by the blushing bride. ~Hugs~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
chuckling...um...he does the breakfast thing...I ain't right in the head until evening, and even then? it's questionable... and Kari? I have no clue what it means either! I was just hungry!  Thanks, good poets--now? why can't I sleep? sigh, sigh, sigh... and ew...DS? just re-read your reply...and I thought I was nuts!  [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-09-2002 08:26 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Good morning dear, we all have those kinds of mornings. No worry  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sy...you heard me sighing didja? hugs back to you, dearheart...I thank you much for stopping by for coffee!  (now I guess I'll go clean the kitchen, it's something I can do while I pace...sigh) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You mean people actually eat at this hour? Just coffee for me, please. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity You just made me very hungry! Going to the frig to get eggbeaters. If you put enough stuff in them (soy cheese and tomatoes) they're pretty good! Hugs! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wow!!! This is indeed a chef du jour, sweet friend, my compliments go out to you, a fine chef of poetry, this is exquisite, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I enjoyed this so much - I am a morning person so it is wonderful to read of those who are not - wonderfully fun poem - Paul |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Cooool poem....enjoyed very much! DeaDiAmore |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Who ???? In their right mind eats early? I can hardly walk, let alone be famished and starved for even this scrumptuous breakfast that has my stomach growling now.... (Mag exits to kitchen, hits the fridge for something to eat) Like this poem, Karen.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Ya' just sang my song here ... I love 'breakfast' before I go to bed ... that way don't have to face-an-egg on awakening~ Love ya' gal .... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Mmm breakfast time!  Enjoyable write, serenity blaze.  ~Beth You look inside my wild mind |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I'm with Duncan and Barry... I have never been able to eat breakfast at breakfast time... I just can't eat in the morning...but I love breakfast, so sometimes I have it for lunch. BTW, Mrs. Newlywed... this is an eggceptional poem... really delicious sounding this evening. ~ hugs of yumLyra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
laughing...Marge got it right...is it really breakfast if it's an early morning supper? Next poem? I'll explain how I manage to convince a sleeping man to wake up and cook for me! OH. (y'might have to visit "that other forum" to read that one!") Thanks all... |
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paper doll Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 133Floating on Uncertainty |
You're lucky that you can eat anything that resembles a meal made for breakfast. My stomach does not agree with any of it. I love the was this read. You have captured the essence of the theme and expanded on it quite well. Thank you for the read. ~M Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
this is making me hungary |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*chuckling* Okay, so I asked for an omelette and got scambled eggs--shrug--it all turns out the same in the end, anyhow! *shudder* somebody STOP me....arrrrgggghhh... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I sort of like mine with salsa and my browns with a bit of tabasco. Ooopss....This is the NON-SMOKING forum......sorry.......I'll just have a cup of coffee then. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (08-10-2002 11:30 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
well...hey..this may be a non-smoking forum...but I believe, with all due respect? IT'S MY TABLE..and yanno? sometimes a cigar is just a cigar....yuk yuk yuk. |
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