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Open Poetry #21

Inspired

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-08 07:51 PM

Inspired

inspired in
the smell
of hot
summer rain
you are
the ache
I can’t
get use to
tastes photograph
that makes
you full
but unable
to get
enough of
caught up
in passions
flood heating
my desire
then cooled
in the
whisper of
your shade

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-08-08 08:11 PM

evocative of the physical and emotional...tropical passion, and the comfort of release/retreat. You write so wispy...like angelhair.

but I guess y'KNEW I could relate to this, huh? *chuckle* (I have already had enough of AUGUST

)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-08-08 08:52 PM

helen - words only you can write, lovely...

BC

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2002-08-08 08:58 PM

Beautiful! We have been getting alot of summer rain, here.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-08 08:59 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh Helen, I think it is amazing how so many things in life can remind us of love, the sun, the wind, the flame, the moon, all inspirations and entities! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!