Open Poetry #21 |
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In Times Like This |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA ![]() |
In Times Like This I love you, in times like this Calling to you with a silent voice Further and further, I miss your kiss Longer and longer, my cry won't dry I promise to forsake all others in pure devotion to read your sorrows with a soft understanding Believe in tomorrow, in romantic notions Come to me like prayer, a bath of pandering Fear is overcome and a thing of the past We'll pull the blankets in tents over heads giggle and hug like lost lovers do waiting on thresholds where two souls are wed (C) 2002 Picasso Lyrics |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Jeff, I feel such soft yearning in these words, I wish for love t awlays fill your heart and wed you over and over again every time you wake up and find sunshine in loves eyes! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
ShadowRider...This is lovely verse. There are a million messages, |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jeff darling heart this is simply exquisite Your writing like a rose captured in it’s peak of perfection is truly a delight to see and witness. I try to understand the message, but even if I didn’t and I do feel it deep in my soul, the images your words conjure adorn the page and are breathtakingly lovely. YOU have to know I love this. I could write you a sonnet to say I really love this but whatever I wrote simply wouldn’t do your writing justice. There are poets and then there are Poets You know you are a real writer, it is not just pretty words with you this is super special. YOU stand out as a writer who has depth of understanding, whose writing simply sings to my soul. This is stunning darling heart utterly utterly stunning As always Mushy ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Fear is overcome and a thing of the past We'll pull the blankets in tents over heads giggle and hug like lost lovers do waiting on thresholds where two souls are wed" Jeff, I love this... I especially love the feeling from this stanza. Good stuff! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Jeff, you amaze me with the beauty of your thoughts, the images of love and the honest expression of what love means to you. Thank You... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jeff Jeff...tender and childlike, and full of love's honesty. This poem should be treasured for years, to bring out when the road gets a bit narrow. ![]() |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
so well written - so full of romance - so nice to read - loved it - paul |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely beautiful writing. Well done. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Believe in tomorrow, in romantic notions Come to me like prayer, a bath of pandering I love the romanticism in these beautiful words, Jeff... ![]() Lyra |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~sigh~ such a lovely read Jeff.....hugssss Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
I set my sights on happiness a few years back. It hasn't been an easy road there, but i think i have reached the driveway! Y'all are too kind. *smiles* Wishing you all the joy in the world! jeff |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds to me as if life's journey is just beginning for you. Such words of devotion in rare honesty and self openness are found all over this piece. Wonderful to read one with his heart on his sleeve and not shy about it one bit. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
~~heartsigh~~...well, you KNOW what I thought of this poem sweetheart...thank you! ![]() |
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