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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-08-08 10:39 AM

Inspiration

Love is blinded by the dark and its fold.
Yet, your spirit moves me, a power of bold.

When broken it seams me, threaded in gold.
Yes love is blind, when I'm held in your hold.

Love is like cheating, its writing offbeat.
Saves me from doings, and crashing defeat.

I dance with the moon, my thoughts to delete.
Yes love is like cheating, when whispering sweet.

Love is a learning, though years have passed by.
In path of friendships, the wanting of why.

Timeless in memories, a kiss and tell lie.
Yes love is like learning, in need and supply.

Inspired by seasons, in hour glass time,
Love is forever, initialed in rhyme.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-08-2002 10:45 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-08-08 10:41 AM

Yes, love is all these things. Very nice write. Enjoyed.

There are a million messages,
in a million bottles,
you just have to know
which one to pull out of the ocean.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-08 10:41 AM

Absolutely excellently crafted. My favorite "grabbing" line of all:

When broken it seams me, threaded in gold.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2002-08-08 11:42 AM

This is a wonderful poem. I love it.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-08-08 11:58 AM

Maureen,
One of your best, a keeper.

bsquirrel

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Member Rara Avis

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Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-08-08 12:10 PM

Is this inspiration from the Love? thread in Feelings? I loved it!

Interloper

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-08-08 12:11 PM

Lovely, Maureen, just lovely.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-08-08 03:46 PM

"initialed in rhyme". . .

I get it M. . . great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana

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Member Patricius

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USA

8 posted 2002-08-08 04:15 PM

nice

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-08-08 05:47 PM

nakdthoughts - treasures are your words...

BC

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