thoughts of me, all by myself

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-08-08 04:06 AM

If love were blood,
I would stare
into the future
pallid-faced.
stitches
would not
grant my stay--
no bandages
would stop the spray--
I'd fight
the arm
of fingered play
suppressing
my express
of heart.

If love were blood
I might believe.

If love were blood--
I'd cease to bleed...

It'd be divine to be atoned.

If love, my love,
within me--dwelled...
--

Surely then, I would explode.

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-08-2002 09:20 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-08-08 05:53 AM

Don't wanna be...all by myself...anymore...James

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2002-08-08 08:53 AM

i'd be an island
in a sea of red
waiting for a sail
from siren voice drift

I enjoy your early morning mind ms serene

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-08-08 09:13 AM

I hear the pumping beat
of this one, Serenity...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-08-08 09:28 AM

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-08-08 10:02 AM

stitches
would not
grant my stay--
no bandages
would stop the spray--
I'd fight
the arm
of fingered play
suppressing
my express
of heart.

If love were blood
I might believe.

If love were blood--
I'd cease to bleed...

It'd be divine to be atoned.
================================

Theres a line in a song...something about only love could turn a red tide to blue ...
Youve written both in your bleeding rhymes divine me twin. So many metaphors made of mirrors.
heart-hugs baby.
mothyme

If all the tear drops went to heaven
And if all the pain was confined ...
Would I be your salvation
could I make your spirit shine.

KWSB

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-08-08 01:41 PM

Maybe your heart is what's blown by this, but you blow my MIND. Man, you're amazing, Sen. I love yr words.

Mike

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-08-08 03:36 PM

within. . . there is. . .

love it . . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-08-08 04:30 PM

serenity

You cut, and bleed and stitch across the page...pieces of your heart.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2002-08-08 04:39 PM

How DO you do this?! Amazing!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2002-08-08 05:47 PM

Ya'll make me smile. Thanks for listening to me while I "talk" to myself. I think I like to write because it's the only time I can edit my thoughts!

yer all wunnerful...

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